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Reviewer: Jay-Bug Signed [Report This]
Date: February 28 2018 10:51 AM Title: Chapter 5

This story totally rules.



Author's Response:

I'm very glad you liked it. It was just a funny idea to me, and it cracks me up that it can be a series, but it speaks to some people so it'll go on. What would you want to see in the future?

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: February 27 2018 4:14 PM Title: Chapter 5

I hesitate to ask what kind of research you had to do for this chapter.



Author's Response:

I could tell you, but it might be easier to just send you the photos in Dropbox.

Reviewer: Olo Signed [Report This]
Date: October 15 2017 1:04 PM Title: Chapter 4

If I ever read a better exploration of a giantess's ass, this story blew it away like one of Carlotta's fermented gusts.  A classic "be careful what you wish for" tale, Cameron's fate is supremely convincing in its depiction of both the sensory delights and discontents and how he has learned to embrace them all.  The attention to detail is superb while avoiding the pitfall (heh) of over-reliance on distractingly pedantic anatomical vocabulary.

I was particularly moved by Cameron's pilgrimage towards some kind of validation in his role, how he can take pride in his fecal duties and even recognize the privilege he is accorded by being admitted to her anus.  A giantess's ass isn't all peaches and cream, but it is still the sanctum santorum, and even the most unpleasant anointment can be borne as an honor.

Cameron never consciously sought to be transformed into an ass-slave, and if presented with a choice he probably would prefer to be restored to full-size, but he has made a thoughtful appreciation of his new life with Carlotta, and all he needs is a little reciprocal appreciation.

And this is where the story fails for me.  I fully buy Carlotta's character during the first three chapters as someone who has encountered something inexplicable (she thought he needed to be taught a lesson, and he magically shrunk) and just accepted it as cosmic justice.  Her centering of her own gratification is neither histrionic nor sadistic, and her seeming indifference to Cameron's plight is less sociopathic than simply selfish.

I appreciate the world-building you're attempting with "Blood Magic," but I thought precipitating the confrontation between Carlotta and Cameron via the woman in the next room was ill-considered.  Introducing the fact that these two women share the otherwise unheard-of experience of magically shrinking a man and then just glossing over the rest of the encounter was dissatisfying.  And Carlotta just "sensing" that a rapport could be established by exposing the tiny man dangling from her ass felt really forced.

This is really Cameron's and Carlotta's story, and the woman next door is an unwelcome distraction.  I would like to work this through more, but if you really needed to get the woman next door involved, I think it would have made it more urgent if Cameron escaped, talked to the woman next door and learned her story, then Carlotta comes over and convinces the woman to hand Cameron over by explaining what he means to her.  Then their spelunktastic reunion would be more convincing.

Bottom (heh) line:  this is an excellent appreciation of what it would be like to live and work in a giantess's nether regions that can appeal to both veteran macrophiles and the gi-curious alike.  Cameron's motives are easier to understand than Carlotta's, but I'm biased.  She wouldn't have to tell me anything twice.

Reviewer: JDO Signed [Report This]
Date: May 21 2016 10:41 PM Title: Chapter 1

I love this shit. It's disgusting, so it's right up my alley. The main character's attitude toward his task makes the story very charming and Cameron is very easy to root for, even though it seems hopeless. The hopelessness has me cheering for his small victories. 

 

In the end, I cannot believe you've made three very unique chapters about a guy stuffed in a girl's asshole. They were all compelling with their own bits of sexiness thrown in. Fuckin' kudos.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for your enthusiastic and thoughtful review. It is supposed to be fun and filthy, as well as sexy in its own way.

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: February 16 2015 9:55 PM Title: Chapter 2

Wonderful story.

Great detailed descriptions.

Fantastic immagination.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you much for saying so!

Reviewer: tinyslave Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2012 8:11 AM Title: Chapter 1

Nice narrative! I like you cut on the "how I got shrunk" explanation chapter. Although I'm not a big poop fan I will certainly follow your coming chapters.

Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2012 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 1

I just had to reread this. You just can't find good butt stories with actually plots. It's mostly the feet or vore stories that have real stories behind them. Nice job!



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! I've been experimenting with plot-driven stories versus "get to the fucking" stories. I'm glad there's a market for something more substantial.

Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20 2012 7:15 PM Title: Chapter 1

I cannot believe I misspelled "detailed." Forgive me.

Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed [Report This]
Date: March 20 2012 7:10 PM Title: Chapter 1

I loved her playful nature, his reluctant acceptance, the dteailed descriptions of the shit, and the wondefully playful antics implied by the ending.

Getting squished by butt cheeks is always fun. I'd have given my left testicle to have been in his position, and Wendel is my favorite!

I hope this helped. Whether or not you do more is up to you.

Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed [Report This]
Date: March 17 2012 7:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

You have GOT to do more of this! If you do nothing else in life, you have to continue this story!



Author's Response:

Met with such enthusiasm, how could I say no? Please tell me what aspects you liked about this story and I will use that to develop a series.

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: March 17 2012 4:23 PM Title: Chapter 1

Well described story, Aborigen.

Good subject matter with a cruel giantess.

I hope you decide to continue it.

 



Author's Response:

Thank you very much for the positive review! I thought this would just be a one-off, but it sounds like there's some interest in more. What elements in the story most appealed to you?

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