Date: March 24 2012 10:38 AM Title: Prologue
Very good! Really looking forward to the rest of the story. I like the aspecT of her high heels.
Date: February 02 2012 12:57 PM Title: Prologue
Pretty good first try! Micro and unaware are always a perfect mix!! I think it's only the beginning of a great story. Please continue, maybe with a little of "hot" action? Anyway, thanks!
Date: February 01 2012 9:56 PM Title: Prologue
Nice work. Keep it up.
Date: January 29 2012 3:41 AM Title: Prologue
Great start! Please continue. Don't do what most of the authors on this site do and just abandon the story. I'm really enjoying this one.
Date: January 28 2012 11:32 PM Title: Prologue
Great start. I've been a little dissapointed in the stories here lately because there's no character developement; this is a bit of a blunt way to do it, but effective. I'm definitely going to keep an eye on this one.
(I was a little confused when you said the Nurse was a divorced widower; then I remember the saying "One husband died, the other was an ass. Wrong one died.")
Date: January 28 2012 5:55 PM Title: Prologue
alright man, its good maybe a little lenghty though as far a bio, but i did like seeing a back story. most of the time when you have a back story you should incorperate it into the story. I really have no complaint but you did catch my attintion