Reviews For The Arte
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Reviewer: Jimbob Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 24 2014 7:03 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Helpless Nightmare

It's a shame this story was never finished.

Reviewer: Isis Tenshi Signed [Report This]
Date: April 26 2013 8:59 PM Title: Chapter 73 - Getting Dressed and Prepared

Love this story, cant wait for more, but i had an idea about what Lucy wants, another kinda magic act that shows Tara how Lucy exactly feels and how Tara would do that for her, on Lucys birthday, would be an awesome adition, and espcilly now with Taras party about to get underway, it would be cool to see your cretivity on the fact that Tara plans a party for Lucy.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 23 2012 12:57 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Helpless Nightmare

 

im just asking as a fan of your work if u can add in some foot action in this story

Reviewer: Sonicfan287 Signed [Report This]
Date: February 01 2012 4:18 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Helpless Nightmare

Ive been reading a lot of your work L2K7 and so far, this is my favorite! (although thats not to say anything bad about Life With Samantha. This has a really touching premise and I cant wait to see what happens next

Reviewer: The_Argonian Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 29 2012 4:54 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Tara Meets Lucy

Wow... I have one word for this story, AMAZING! I'm captivated by how quickly Lucy and Tara become friends, those who make friends in the face of battle stay friends. The death of Lucy's mother touched me, a sad loss early on in the story... But I can't wait for more! I also can't wait to see what other creatures lie in this world! I want to see how creative you can get, I await to see some more wacky and wonderful creatures and perhapes maybe some new characters? Keep up the good work! You, my friend, have youself a fan!

Reviewer: LJin Signed [Report This]
Date: January 21 2012 6:28 AM Title: Chapter 5 - Adverse Effects and Lucy's Discovery

Tara will probably have such a difficult time when she wakes up. It seems she have great fear of being helpless and powerless; now standing only a few inches tall she will be so scared and sad. :( I'm glad Lucy will take care of her.

Reviewer: lilguyunderfoot Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2012 5:51 PM Title: Chapter 1 - Helpless Nightmare

cool stuff, i like it

Reviewer: The_Argonian Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 16 2012 2:53 AM Title: Chapter 1 - Helpless Nightmare

Wow... one word for you: AMAZING! I take it this will be a fantasy story due to the dragon and a mysterious power or element called "the Arte". The only thing I didn't like about this story was there was no decent description of the dragon, it only mentioned that it was a Fire Dragon. But without a doubt I'm sure we'll find out what one looks like soon.

 

I await to read more of this story.



Author's Response:

Well, I haven't done THAT much magic stuff and the main point of the story was supposed to be what happened to the two of them, rather than the dragon itself.  Don't worry, Dragons will be back later on and I'll try to be more descriptive.

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