[Report This]Date: June 01 2012 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter my friend. Love how the relationship between Sylvie an Valdan is 'progressing'(glad all my sisters are older than me... an not giant-sized lol)
This new business with Belenda an the arranged suitor is quite intriguing. Don't even want to speculate what will happen cause I want to be surprised. Admire Alban all the more for the fact that he wishes to meet with the young man an explain everything to him first an foremost. My only concern is that Arily an Belenda are growing steadily apart, that could just be a completely unfounded concern of my though(albeit completely imaginary).
At any rate I can't wait to see to where the next chapter takes us.
aaron
Author's Response:
I'm afraid there's lots more to come, so you might not get all the answers next chapter, lol. Belena and Arily aren't drifting apart, though, they're on good terms right now, and they do care a lot about each other.
[Report This]Date: May 06 2012 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great update, Malaka!! Hope to read more. I love these characters.
aaron
Date: May 06 2012 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 4
The scene between Belena and the flustered peasant boy was very cute (and kind of sexy. A giant kiss and a tumble into the princess's decolletage. Lucky bastard).
Valdan traveling with Sylvie ought to be rather amusing. It will be interesting to see how their relationship and opinions of each other change.
Author's Response:
Yeah, Belena is quite clueless when it comes to those kind of situations, but that'll change soon, I guess. I'm still figuring out how to handle Valdan's story, though.
Date: May 06 2012 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
I know I wouldn't want to be out in the woods at night. Maybe he hasn't thought this through properly. I guess he might find a demsel in distress somewhere but the chances of that are low...
Also, you've gone from chapter 3 to chapter 5. Since you have a proglue it doesn't think its chapter 4 when it generates the name. There are so many little things that would make giantessworld so much better, like for starters a forum to help those who want help with their stories before posting. You're one of the few good writers on here, and it's hard to find anything that really grabs my attention or maybe I'm just not into giantess a much as I used to be. The recent clips I brought were dissapointing so that doesn't help.
Author's Response:
He's not really after a damsel to save, he's just more focused on making a name for himself, like his father did when he was young. Thanks for once again correcting my chapter # mistake, I keep forgetting no. 1 was a prologue.
Date: March 05 2012 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 3
It's nice to see this story back. Did you notice that in the chapter names you jump from Chapter 2 to chapter 4? I noticed because I hadn't read chapter 2 until today either as I've been away for a while.
Author's Response:
Thanks for letting me know, I've corrected that. Was just a bit tired that night when I posted it, I guess!
[Report This]Date: March 03 2012 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 3
Seriously great chapter. Kept me riveted. Eventhough belena's upset that arily is moving out to be with her lover, still can't help but feel that it's for the best. An is it just me or is sylvie really tall...(eventhough she's a giantess)
So I guess it's safe to say that belena's true love hasn't revealed him/herself yet..(just thought I'd throw that in there, lol)
aaron
Author's Response:
Sylvie is quite tall, though she is nearly an adult, I guess. But I think she'll be taller than Belena or her mom when she's done growing. Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: February 16 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great chapter. Can't help but think that prince valdan will somehow be the villain in this tale, most likely I'm wrong but that just seems to be where he's headed. Unless something happens to him that will forever change him. An I love absolutely love princess belena. Glad she has a tiny friend an the fact that she is from the poor district makes it that much more alluring. Wonder what is going to happen next?
aaron
PS did queen valerie show the giant sister how to be gentle with little people at a younger age by practicing with their father?
Author's Response:
Thank you for the nice review! I'm sorry it took me so long to respond, just been incredibly busy lately. The next chapter is taking forever to write too, but it should be on by this weekend. Also, yes, Alban did find himself being used as a 'practice toy' a bit lol.
Date: February 10 2012 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
Valdan wearing the doll dress reminded me of Buzz Lightyear at the doll tea party in the first Toy Story. "My name is Mrs. Nesbitt!" :P
I suppose Valdan should count himself lucky if that's the worst his sisters put him through. Gigantic sisters could make his life much more difficult (unless they already have and we just haven't seen it yet).
Author's Response:
Hah, I'd completely forgotten that scene (I got my idea from that recent, terrible Gulliver's Travels movie :-). Thankfully, Valdan hasn't been put through worse, but that might change...
Date: February 10 2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
Poor Valdan, he just wanted to be like his sisters, he must feel out of the place. :( And having his little sister dominating and humiliating him like that must be very frustrating. I would be very sad in his place. I kinda feel why he wants to run away from home... Though, I know his sisters will be very worried and miss him so much, even little Sylvie, I'm almost sure that she loves him a lot too (maybe this is why she loves to 'play' with him) but can't help to enjoy pestering him like almost every sister/brother do. Brotherly/Sisterly love unfortunately are like this. lol :P
Well just my thoughts. Hope everything ends well for each one of them in future chapters. Belena already is going well from what I can see!
I like very much your writing
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I really like your insights, you seem to understand my characters well :) Sylvie needs to grow up a bit, but she doesn't really want to. As for the ending, that's still a looong way off, and there's lots more to come before that.
[Report This]Date: January 28 2012 6:11 PM Title: Chapter 1
best ending line ever "a stern voice called out from behind her: “What on earth is going on here?” ha ha
Author's Response:
I know, but it was the only place I could think of to split the text, lol
Date: January 28 2012 6:02 PM Title: Prologue
good start lets hope the two princesses dont decide they should over throw any one
Date: January 28 2012 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 1
I can understand why he thinks like that being the only tiny son, it must be very difficult! But Belena seems quite a lovely sweet girl, I'm glad to see she loves and truly cares about her tiny brother.
And Belena need to learn to not scare the tiny ones to death by suddenly picking them up like that. lol But still was very cute, especialy with her trying to stroke him reassuringly with her finger. She just want to be gentle with her subjects and make them like her. I think she will be a good Queen in the future.
Author's Response:
Thank you, great review. Yes, Belena is still a bit awkward and all that, but she'll get better.
[Report This]Date: January 28 2012 2:16 PM Title: Prologue
As always a very nice start into a new chapter of your stories^^
[Report This]Date: January 27 2012 9:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
Very good(if not a little boring) but that's not to say I didn't enjoy it. Love this Belinda character an her brother seems cool too an it willbe easy to relate to him an sympathize as well.
Anyways great story.
Aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks! The first few chapters will be a little slow (backstory and all that), but things will pick up after that.
Date: January 27 2012 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 1
I feel sorry for Valdan to be born small when his sisters are born big. I think i would find it unfair also. I hope things get better for him maybe he is a late bloomer and will become bigger latter on in life or that he finds out that he is much stronger then a human even if he is the same size as them, like have the strength of a giant.
Looks like Belena already not good by getting graby and picking people up when they don't want to be pick up.
Story seem like it will be fun, i will look forward to what happens in it.
Author's Response:
Thank you! I hope the next few chapters won't take me as long to write as this one, but we'll see.
Date: January 27 2012 3:28 PM Title: Chapter 1
I am not sure Belena will make a good queen, I could be wrong though.
Author's Response:
Becoming queen is still a long way off for her, she can definitely learn more before then.
Date: January 15 2012 10:20 PM Title: Prologue
Wow, my last story inspired you to write again? I'm flattered. I hope you enjoyed it. Please leave a review if you get the chance.
I'm fine with this not being a fetish story. I just meant that some of us giantess fans tend to fetishize the idea in our minds even when a story or scenario is not intended as such. I was wondering about the age of the characters so I would know if I should turn that part of my brain off and just enjoy this as a story.
Author's Response:
Belena will be aged twelve in the first two chapters, but for most of the story she'll be eighteen. There won't be any really risque scenes later on, just a few little scenes here and there - but I haven't really thought that far ahead!
PS: I've reviewed The Wasteland.
Date: January 15 2012 12:59 AM Title: Prologue
Awesome to see you continuing this. I enjoyed the first story and had hoped to see more with these characters. The giant sisters and normal-sized brother should provide an interesting angle for this one.
I too am wondering how far ahead you will jump. Hopefully, they won't be underage for too long or the GTS fetish-y side of my mind will feel a bit uncomfortable. ;)
Author's Response:
Thank you! It was reading the conclusion of your last story that made me want to write again, so I decided to try this tale, and I hope it'll be fun.
There'll be a few early chapters where they're still children, but most of the chapters will focus on the kids in their late teens. This won't really be a fetish story, but I'm hoping you'll like it.
Date: January 15 2012 12:43 AM Title: Prologue
Wow, so they managed to have children. That must have been awkward for Alban - actually perish the thought. It's nice to see you writing again.
Author's Response:
Actually, I think Alban quite enjoyed it. Wouldn't you? :)
[Report This]Date: January 14 2012 11:04 PM Title: Prologue
interesting. wonder how many years ahead you will start chapter one(if at all). havent read an adventure/gts story in awhile an im looking forward to it.
an glad to see your name pop up once again.
aaron
ps im working on a story of my own(should be out in a few days/weeks)
Author's Response:
Chapter one is almost done, but I'll wait a bit before I post it, and write chapter two first. Thanks for reviewing, and good luck with your story!