This is a great story.  Well written, and very nicely laid out.  I like the set-up, with the giant sisters, and the tiny brother.  I'm just starting to read it, and would like to take my time and really 'get-in-to-it', (and, I will) I hate to rush through a story like this.(If you know what I mean?) Ha! 

Really Great !  I think I'll add U to my Fav's........

Hi! I just wanted to say that this must be my favourite GTS story ( I am including the story of their parents as well ). It's very well written and it includes a couple of things that really interest me (gentle, yet powerful females trying to live normal lives... and also a part of me can understand Valdan being jealous of her huge sisters)

It's a pity we have to wait to see what happens next but you deserve to write something you'll enjoy :)

Was so glad that something like that happened to Sylvie an the whole part where valdan was in the stomach an being digested was extremely well written, I was afraid that everything would be hunky dory after he was rescued from there. Excellent job in depicting the perfect mood for the characters as well as the dialog.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks, hope it was worth the wait, lol!

Noooooo! LOL jk I cant wait to see your next story. And now I have this story to look forward to in the future. god I hope I dont die! lol

u tease us with your additions LOL. whenever u put out a new character it makes my day that much better thx.

As much as I'd like to see what Belena's up to, even though this is now two Sylvie/Valdan chapters in a row, I really don't want to wait two weeks to see how this cliffhanger works out.  Sylvie was still a little selfish at the beggining there, but this looks like a turning point for both siblings.

On a lighter note, it's kind of a trope that the more you check that no one is watching, the more likely someone is.  And I noticed there's no mention of Rett in the village.  Just saying.

Ok, so Slyvie is slowly getting there. She at least realizes how much of a jerk she's been in that situation. She now just needs to reflect on all of the times she's been a jerk in her life and empathize with Valdan.

Can't wait to see what happens with Belena and Lorek. 

No WAY Man!
It ain't done yet! ;^)

If you ever get back into the swing, I'm one who would be glad to read on.

Author's Response:

No worries, it's still FAR from done! ;)

I'm really enjoying both story lines here.  Yeah, Belena moving a little fast, but I like were she's headed. 

Regarding Sylvie, I think it's more the way she forces her brother to do what she wants despite the fact that he doesn't like it; who also happens to be rather sympathic.  I know he's supposed to come off bratty too, but it's not unjustified from what we've seen.  If she head a more willing playmate, I think the backlash would be less.

There seems to be a bit of backlash in the comments against Sylvie (or Isylvine. Awesome name, by the way!). To be honest, I wasn't that bothered by her. As giantesses go, she could be a lot worse. Sylvie seems to enjoy teasing and toying with little people a bit and does come across as a brat. But at heart, she seems to be a good person who wouldn't actually harm anyone. Her mother's teachings do show through. I see Sylvie as a bit spoiled and enamored of size difference, not really sick or cruel.

But hey, what do I know? I like a giantess who's a bit playful and dominant, as long as she doesn't cross the line with her games.