Date: May 01 2013 11:58 AM Title: Chapter 16
I was hoping at least Rett would go back with them. Actually I was thinking if Valdan choose to stay in the village, Sylvie would've needed a witness to prove to her parents that she didn't just abandon her brother. The part where she calls him 'big' brother was touching.
While I don't want this story to stop again, I do look forward to your new story because I enjoy all your stories.
Author's Response:
I know it's a little late (I've finally got round to finishing it!) but thanks for the great review!
Date: April 30 2013 4:59 PM Title: Chapter 16
I'm glad this one got some addition though
really good narrative and descriptions and I really do love the setting in this tale so far.
At least these 2 are gettin along a little better it seems XD
Author's Response:
Thanks, your compliments are appreciated!
[Report This]Date: April 30 2013 4:39 PM Title: Chapter 16
as you seem to be good at the whole fantasy genre... Would you accept my request if i explained it to you? If you just explained me why it wasnt convincing i'ld understand and if you like it but want to write the other story first i can wait. 8(
Author's Response:
You're welcome to explain your request, and I'll let you know whether I like it or not. But, as I've said, this story is very close to being finished, and, since I've already planned it ahead, I probably won't be adding in aything I haven't thought of yet. I can still use your request for any future unplanned stories though, so feel free to let me know. Thanks for the review!