[Report This]Date: April 03 2013 7:14 PM Title: Chapter 15
I was afraid Orlak would react that way to Lorek's soon to be marriage to Belenda. That being said I loved how the whole situation was handled by the king an queen as well as Belenda's reaction to the asskicking that Lorek received. Loved how everything was very realistic an it's very heart warming when Belenda misses her brother and sister. Also the fact that the dollhouse was suited for a larger size what with the giant bed an what not. Then Belenda was giving Lorek a little show before she snuffed out the candle, wonder if he caught a peek.
aaron
Author's Response:
I'm sure he did catch a peek, and it could only have made him more excited about staying with her! Thanks for the review, aaron.
[Report This]Date: April 03 2013 11:27 AM Title: Chapter 15
love the new chapter. And i got an idea for a new character. How about a wandering 13-year old mischief causing orphan boy who annoys the shit out of silvye so she realizes what valdan had been through all those years. And later Silvye and the boy become great friends
Author's Response:
Good idea, though I doubt Sylvie would let some little kid annoy her for long. She'd probably just stuff him in her boot or something, and only let him out when he started to cry! Anyway, she and Valdan will be back in the next chapter.