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Reviewer: deathshinigami Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 22 2013 8:53 AM Title: Chapter 14

*obnoxious voice* gee hows lorek gonna get out of this situation? Seriously though, great chapter

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2013 2:38 AM Title: Chapter 14

A new chapter! Nice! The father's anti-giant prejudice will certainly complicate things. I was surprised that the worst he expected of the queen was that she'd lock them up. If he considers them "man-eating bitches," surely throwing them in the dungeon is not the worst she could do (in his imagination).



Author's Response:

Well, she could lock them up first and eat them later! ;-) But, of course, Valerie had never actually eaten a person before; Orlak is just conflating her with actual man-eating giants of the distant past - just because he doesn't like her, doesn't trust her, and wants her to leave.

Reviewer: sketch Signed [Report This]
Date: March 22 2013 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 14

Whoo!!! New chapter!

Oh man, poor Lorek.  I can't beleive Belena would spring this on him after not seeing each other for over a week. 



Author's Response:

She has been very scatterbrained lately, it's true. But Lorek is also at fault; he hadn't made it clear enough to her how much his dad hated the giant race. In any case, Belen awill definitely feel extremly guilty about her decision, and she'll have to make it up to Lorek somehow.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2013 11:00 PM Title: Chapter 14

Great to see a update from this story! This is one of my favorites, an this chapter was fantastic. Couldn't be happier on how it turned out.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks, it is kinda hard to get back to telling this story, after abandoning it for such a while.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2013 7:19 PM Title: Chapter 14

 

Great addition as always. Hope to see more soon



Author's Response:

Definitely! I have time now, so the next chapter should be on soon.

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