Reviews For Children of Vandan
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Reviewer: Satsurou Signed [Report This]
Date: October 23 2012 4:31 PM Title: Chapter 13

Hi! I just wanted to say that this must be my favourite GTS story ( I am including the story of their parents as well ). It's very well written and it includes a couple of things that really interest me (gentle, yet powerful females trying to live normal lives... and also a part of me can understand Valdan being jealous of her huge sisters)

It's a pity we have to wait to see what happens next but you deserve to write something you'll enjoy :)

 



Author's Response:

Thanks for all the interest, I'm really glad that you enjoy this story so much! I've actually decided to put that other story I started on hold for a bit, and finish Children of Vandan first, since I begin to regret leaving it unfinished more and more. So you should see another chapter soon...or whenever I find time to write again, lol!

Reviewer: sketch Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 19 2012 9:21 PM Title: Chapter 13

I'm going to echo that noooo, but I would be a hypocrite if I couldn't patiently wait through an extended break.

Look forward to when you continue this story and anything else you write.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2012 8:22 PM Title: Chapter 13

Was so glad that something like that happened to Sylvie an the whole part where valdan was in the stomach an being digested was extremely well written, I was afraid that everything would be hunky dory after he was rescued from there. Excellent job in depicting the perfect mood for the characters as well as the dialog.

aaron

Author's Response:

Thanks, hope it was worth the wait, lol!

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: September 17 2012 7:53 PM Title: Chapter 13

Good fight scene and a solid temporary conclusion. Sylvie has certainly grown as a person (heh, not the sort of growth one expects in a giantess story) and Valdan will no doubt see her quite differently from now on. Looking forward to the eventual continuation and any other projects you work on.



Author's Response:

Thank you very much! To be honest, I was getting a bit tired of working on this story only, so my next one will be a lot different.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2012 9:19 AM Title: Chapter 13

 

Noooooo! LOL jk I cant wait to see your next story. And now I have this story to look forward to in the future. god I hope I dont die! lol



Author's Response:

Ha, I hope not!

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