Date: August 27 2012 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 12
Ooo, a wyvern! This took a rather action-packed turn. I was wondering what might shake Sylvie and Valdan out of their selfishness and petty arguments. Looking forward to seeing how this pans out. A giantess vs. a giant monster is always a great scenario.
[Report This]Date: August 27 2012 12:24 AM Title: Chapter 12
u tease us with your additions LOL. whenever u put out a new character it makes my day that much better thx.
[Report This]Date: August 26 2012 6:38 PM Title: Chapter 12
Awesome I was hoping something like this would happen. An kudos with how unusual you described the 'dragon' well done. Can't wait to see what happens next.
aaron
Ps does the dragon use it's wings like a bat? Like when it crawls on the ground. Cause that's how I picture it moving.
Author's Response:
Thanks, aaron! Yeah, it uses its wings as extra legs, sort of, when it moves on the ground, otherwise it would topple over, lol.
[Report This]Date: August 26 2012 9:51 AM Title: Chapter 12
As much as I'd like to see what Belena's up to, even though this is now two Sylvie/Valdan chapters in a row, I really don't want to wait two weeks to see how this cliffhanger works out. Sylvie was still a little selfish at the beggining there, but this looks like a turning point for both siblings.
On a lighter note, it's kind of a trope that the more you check that no one is watching, the more likely someone is. And I noticed there's no mention of Rett in the village. Just saying.
Author's Response:
Rett was there, lol, he just didn't have anything to say! The next chapter will focus on Sylvie as well, so as not to break the flow of the story at the moment.
[Report This]Date: August 26 2012 8:43 AM Title: Chapter 12
I was really excited to see this new chapter up!
Yeah, I'm working on a story or two. I would have had something posted already, but I'm still trying to completely understand the page for submitting stories.