[Report This]Date: August 14 2012 1:12 AM Title: Chapter 10
No WAY Man!
It ain't done yet! ;^)
If you ever get back into the swing, I'm one who would be glad to read on.
Author's Response:
No worries, it's still FAR from done! ;)
[Report This]Date: August 10 2012 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 10
Amazing chapter. Love these characters.
An I like how cool queen Valerie is being with the whole thing. Can't wait to seewhat happens next.
aaron
Date: August 08 2012 12:14 AM Title: Chapter 10
I'm really enjoying both story lines here. Yeah, Belena moving a little fast, but I like were she's headed.
Regarding Sylvie, I think it's more the way she forces her brother to do what she wants despite the fact that he doesn't like it; who also happens to be rather sympathic. I know he's supposed to come off bratty too, but it's not unjustified from what we've seen. If she head a more willing playmate, I think the backlash would be less.
Author's Response:
I don't mind if people don't like Sylvie's character, she is supposed to be a bit unlikeable. I would choose Valdan's side too, since his exasperation towards her is quite understandable! But I don't think Sylvie will turn out bad.
[Report This]Date: August 07 2012 1:22 PM Title: Chapter 10
Aww that was a very sweet and cute chapter. I enjoyed it very much, both of them are so shy and cute. Already letting him lay and rest on her breasts, that is nice.