Date: July 26 2012 6:54 PM Title: Chapter 9
There seems to be a bit of backlash in the comments against Sylvie (or Isylvine. Awesome name, by the way!). To be honest, I wasn't that bothered by her. As giantesses go, she could be a lot worse. Sylvie seems to enjoy teasing and toying with little people a bit and does come across as a brat. But at heart, she seems to be a good person who wouldn't actually harm anyone. Her mother's teachings do show through. I see Sylvie as a bit spoiled and enamored of size difference, not really sick or cruel.
But hey, what do I know? I like a giantess who's a bit playful and dominant, as long as she doesn't cross the line with her games.
Author's Response:
Thanks, that is exctly what I'm aiming for with her character. Also, thanks for liking the name - I made it up because I wanted something original.
[Report This]Date: July 25 2012 9:48 PM Title: Chapter 9
Sylvie really is a sick person, she is more easy to dislike than to like. I can't believe how she acts and treats people by picking them up, playing around to crush them and orders the people of the village to give her food, thats just horrible. It's even worst by the fact she is a princess that makes her feel she has even more power over people on top of her giant size.
I see her never becoming a good person to anyone that is smaller than her and even more so becoming a good person to her older brother. I feel so bad for Valdan how his life has been, he never seems to be happy around his family and they don't see this, only a few people do see it that are not family.
I like their sister Belena she is a sweet and good person with a hint of shyness to her. I like how she acts around that one boy that likes her.
Valdan i just feel bad for, the poor guy has never gets a break from his family and from Sylvie.
I look forward to each new chapter, you have been doing a good job on wrighting the story. I enjoy reading it.
Author's Response:
Thank you very much for the review, though you're wrong about Sylvie - she will change, and soon.
[Report This]Date: July 25 2012 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 9
love the addition. u really got to feel bad for Valdan though, he never really gets what he wants.
Author's Response:
He'll have his happy end, but he's got to suffer a bit more, unfortunately ;-)