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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 07 2012 10:32 PM Title: Chapter 8

Loved the foot rubbing by that douche-bag. Glad he got a little taste of what he deserves. Glad you made this chapter bout Belenda also glad that Lorek is back. Can't wait to read what happens next.

aaron
Ps when I said I was glad this chapter was about Belenda I meant I liked seeing a chapter a with valdan an Sylvie then the one with Belenda. Was glad you didn't cram them together in one chapter, cause I rather enjoyed only focusing on one or the other.
Btw awesome job with the story telling with this one.

Author's Response:

Thanks! Glad you like both the storylines, and yeah, cramming them together would be a mistake, since they really have nothing to do with each other.

Reviewer: Afroking Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 05 2012 9:00 PM Title: Chapter 8

 

awwww good chapter i need more lol. Great work on the story.



Author's Response:

There'll be lots more, don't worry about that!

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: July 05 2012 8:48 PM Title: Chapter 8

Good chapter. I was wondering when Lorek and Belena would be reunited. I must admit, from the start Belena reminded me of Merida from Pixar's "Brave" and the suitor business reenforces that. But I suppose it's a challenge one would expect a giant princess to face.

I only wish the scene of her toying with Argo had been a bit longer. *evil smile*



Author's Response:

I'm still deciding if Argo should return, but he probably will. I haven't seen Brave yet, I'll have to wait till August to see it here. :-S

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