Date: July 17 2012 2:21 PM Title: Chapter 5
I can't believe they're already thinking about marrying the princess. I'm glad she doesn't want to marry him because it does seem rather rushed (premtive).
[Report This]Date: June 10 2012 8:28 PM Title: Chapter 5
i really hopoe you keep writing because so far what i've seen is people on here with very little creativity, your stories are more fun i think.
Date: June 04 2012 2:29 AM Title: Chapter 5
A suitor for Belena, eh? Interesting. I love the playfully antagonistic interactions of Sylvie and Valdan. That will provide plenty of comedy in chapters to come, I'm sure.
Author's Response:
"Playfully antagaonistic" seems to be the key concept here, lol! Thanks for the review.
[Report This]Date: June 01 2012 10:56 AM Title: Chapter 5
I hope something happens to Sylvie on the journey to make her stop being such a horrible person to her brother. Arily is right to what Valdan was saying she is bad at being a princess and would not make a very good queen.
I hope to see them run into a mage that some how switches their size for a bit or forever.
Am enjoying the story but so far i am not liking Sylvie and feeling bad for Valdan.
Author's Response:
Ha, that would be the ultimate in just deserts! But don't worry, Sylvie will turn out all right eventually, but there's still a long way to go.
[Report This]Date: June 01 2012 10:11 AM Title: Chapter 5
wow glad to see the story back, I cant wait till they st off on their journey.
Author's Response:
Thanks, I'll try and write the next chapter quicker than the previous few.
[Report This]Date: June 01 2012 9:40 AM Title: Chapter 5
Great chapter my friend. Love how the relationship between Sylvie an Valdan is 'progressing'(glad all my sisters are older than me... an not giant-sized lol)
This new business with Belenda an the arranged suitor is quite intriguing. Don't even want to speculate what will happen cause I want to be surprised. Admire Alban all the more for the fact that he wishes to meet with the young man an explain everything to him first an foremost. My only concern is that Arily an Belenda are growing steadily apart, that could just be a completely unfounded concern of my though(albeit completely imaginary).
At any rate I can't wait to see to where the next chapter takes us.
aaron
Author's Response:
I'm afraid there's lots more to come, so you might not get all the answers next chapter, lol. Belena and Arily aren't drifting apart, though, they're on good terms right now, and they do care a lot about each other.