Date: July 08 2012 5:01 PM Title: Chapter 4
After reading chapter 8, I looked this over again to see Lorek's character again.
I can see how Lorek may interest Belena now (parental issues/lack of parents hint), or his little show of bravery (how he actually spoke to her) and now his apparent interest in seeing her again by sneaking through the giant castle.
Though I'm curious in how your going to make Lorek that dream man Belena's always dreamed of.
But, nevertheless, I will wait patiently for your next chapter showcasing how Vandan and Slyvie can possibly reunite. Or grow as characters.
Author's Response:
Thanks for reading, I hope the next chapter will live up to expectations! I'll try and write more about Lorek's character, he definitely needs to be more than just the required love interest.
[Report This]Date: May 06 2012 3:29 PM Title: Chapter 4
Great update, Malaka!! Hope to read more. I love these characters.
aaron
Date: May 06 2012 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 4
The scene between Belena and the flustered peasant boy was very cute (and kind of sexy. A giant kiss and a tumble into the princess's decolletage. Lucky bastard).
Valdan traveling with Sylvie ought to be rather amusing. It will be interesting to see how their relationship and opinions of each other change.
Author's Response:
Yeah, Belena is quite clueless when it comes to those kind of situations, but that'll change soon, I guess. I'm still figuring out how to handle Valdan's story, though.
Date: May 06 2012 10:18 AM Title: Chapter 4
I know I wouldn't want to be out in the woods at night. Maybe he hasn't thought this through properly. I guess he might find a demsel in distress somewhere but the chances of that are low...
Also, you've gone from chapter 3 to chapter 5. Since you have a proglue it doesn't think its chapter 4 when it generates the name. There are so many little things that would make giantessworld so much better, like for starters a forum to help those who want help with their stories before posting. You're one of the few good writers on here, and it's hard to find anything that really grabs my attention or maybe I'm just not into giantess a much as I used to be. The recent clips I brought were dissapointing so that doesn't help.
Author's Response:
He's not really after a damsel to save, he's just more focused on making a name for himself, like his father did when he was young. Thanks for once again correcting my chapter # mistake, I keep forgetting no. 1 was a prologue.