Reviews For Children of Vandan
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Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 21 2013 9:20 PM Title: Chapter 3

This is a great story.  Well written, and very nicely laid out.  I like the set-up, with the giant sisters, and the tiny brother.  I'm just starting to read it, and would like to take my time and really 'get-in-to-it', (and, I will) I hate to rush through a story like this.(If you know what I mean?) Ha! 

Really Great !  I think I'll add U to my Fav's........



Author's Response:

Thanks very much! I'm always tempted to 'rush through it' when I'm writing it, so I'm glad someone is actually taking their time to read it, haha!

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: March 05 2012 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 3

It's nice to see this story back. Did you notice that in the chapter names you jump from Chapter 2 to chapter 4? I noticed because I hadn't read chapter 2 until today either as I've been away for a while.



Author's Response:

Thanks for letting me know, I've corrected that. Was just a bit tired that night when I posted it, I guess!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 03 2012 10:47 PM Title: Chapter 3

Seriously great chapter. Kept me riveted. Eventhough belena's upset that arily is moving out to be with her lover, still can't help but feel that it's for the best. An is it just me or is sylvie really tall...(eventhough she's a giantess)
So I guess it's safe to say that belena's true love hasn't revealed him/herself yet..(just thought I'd throw that in there, lol)

aaron

Author's Response:

Sylvie is quite tall, though she is nearly an adult, I guess. But I think she'll be taller than Belena or her mom when she's done growing. Thanks for the review!

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