[Report This]Date: February 16 2012 5:29 PM Title: Chapter 2
Great chapter. Can't help but think that prince valdan will somehow be the villain in this tale, most likely I'm wrong but that just seems to be where he's headed. Unless something happens to him that will forever change him. An I love absolutely love princess belena. Glad she has a tiny friend an the fact that she is from the poor district makes it that much more alluring. Wonder what is going to happen next?
aaron
PS did queen valerie show the giant sister how to be gentle with little people at a younger age by practicing with their father?
Author's Response:
Thank you for the nice review! I'm sorry it took me so long to respond, just been incredibly busy lately. The next chapter is taking forever to write too, but it should be on by this weekend. Also, yes, Alban did find himself being used as a 'practice toy' a bit lol.
Date: February 10 2012 11:48 PM Title: Chapter 2
Valdan wearing the doll dress reminded me of Buzz Lightyear at the doll tea party in the first Toy Story. "My name is Mrs. Nesbitt!" :P
I suppose Valdan should count himself lucky if that's the worst his sisters put him through. Gigantic sisters could make his life much more difficult (unless they already have and we just haven't seen it yet).
Author's Response:
Hah, I'd completely forgotten that scene (I got my idea from that recent, terrible Gulliver's Travels movie :-). Thankfully, Valdan hasn't been put through worse, but that might change...
Date: February 10 2012 4:41 PM Title: Chapter 2
Poor Valdan, he just wanted to be like his sisters, he must feel out of the place. :( And having his little sister dominating and humiliating him like that must be very frustrating. I would be very sad in his place. I kinda feel why he wants to run away from home... Though, I know his sisters will be very worried and miss him so much, even little Sylvie, I'm almost sure that she loves him a lot too (maybe this is why she loves to 'play' with him) but can't help to enjoy pestering him like almost every sister/brother do. Brotherly/Sisterly love unfortunately are like this. lol :P
Well just my thoughts. Hope everything ends well for each one of them in future chapters. Belena already is going well from what I can see!
I like very much your writing
Author's Response:
Thank you very much! I really like your insights, you seem to understand my characters well :) Sylvie needs to grow up a bit, but she doesn't really want to. As for the ending, that's still a looong way off, and there's lots more to come before that.