Reviewer: LJin Signed [Report This]
Date: January 28 2012 2:49 PM Title: Chapter 1

I can understand why he thinks like that being the only tiny son, it must be very difficult! But Belena seems quite a lovely sweet girl, I'm glad to see she loves and truly cares about her tiny brother.

And Belena need to learn to not scare the tiny ones to death by suddenly picking them up like that. lol But still was very cute, especialy with her trying to stroke him reassuringly with her finger. She just want to be gentle with her subjects and make them like her. I think she will be a good Queen in the future.

Author's Response:

Thank you, great review. Yes, Belena is still a bit awkward and all that, but she'll get better.

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed [Report This]
Date: January 27 2012 4:38 PM Title: Chapter 1

I feel sorry for Valdan to be born small when his sisters are born big. I think i would find it unfair also. I hope things get better for him maybe he is a late bloomer and will become bigger latter on in life or that he finds out that he is much stronger then a human even if he is the same size as them, like have the strength of a giant.

Looks like Belena already not good by getting graby and picking people up when they don't want to be pick up.

Story seem like it will be fun, i will look forward to what happens in it.

Author's Response:

Thank you! I hope the next few chapters won't take me as long to write as this one, but we'll see.