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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 2 Rubies in the Dark

I noticed this:

However, due to the size of the size Lord William decided

 Size of what? Prison cell I'm assuming.

And here:

Those giant irises were the color or rubies

Color of rubies.

 

Oversized cobwebs...interesting. Onwwards; I must know more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for pointing those two things out. I'm surprised no one else noticed them. These are all first draft chapters, so there's bond to be some mistakes here and there. If you notice anymore, please tell me. 

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