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Reviewer: rrclover Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2022 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 1 Lord William's New Guest

btw this stories based off of an interactive that has all sorts of creachers like fiarys to dragons link

https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1562917-The-Prisoner/map/

Reviewer: Evermore Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2015 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 1 Lord William's New Guest

I thought I would leave a review here, just to let the author know that there are still people out there who would be interested in seeing this story continue. There are a lot of things I'd like to see, including why finding out Felix is human startled Arachne, the way Felix and Arachne relationship evolves as she grows larger and, of course, if the two of them can ever escape Lord William. I understand that those things, especially the last bit, will probably be difficult to resolve in the plot, but please keep up the good work!

 

Reviewer: aronse265 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2014 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 1 Lord William's New Guest

Hey, this story is AMAZING I love how you have included a dridder from felarya, and since I love felarya i figured i would love this too and i was correct. Please reply and tell me when you are thinking of posting the next chapter because that would be awesome if we knew an estimated time for the next chapter.

Reviewer: Gadgetman Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 1 Lord William's New Guest

Very nice man I love this story, its gentle and cute. I kinda wish a comic was made of this, because as much as I love the world of felarya, pretty much every comic that takes place in it is not gentle.



Author's Response:

Thanks, but this story is also not even set in Felarya. It just has a character from Felarya who is now trapped in another world.

Reviewer: zenonvip78 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2012 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 1 Lord William's New Guest

A very thought-through and nicely written story plus a hint of Felarya. Simply a pure win! :D

I can't wait to see how this story progresses! :)

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2012 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 1 Lord William's New Guest

I wonder what or who the guest is. I really want to find out, so I'm heading the next chapter right now.

Reviewer: Krauser Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 01 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1 Lord William's New Guest

Hey man this is really great stuff! Please tell me you will continue this story, I'm hooked! A felarya story has never made me feel this way before! You just gotta continue it or i'll die!

Reviewer: asdfsdfasdf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2011 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 1 Lord William's New Guest

Great story and well written! I was happy to see you added more chapters. I really enjoy these types of characters and how they build a trust for each other. 

I can't wait to see what happens next. I can't anticapate where the plot is going from here.

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