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Reviewer: rrclover Signed [Report This]
Date: June 29 2022 2:23 AM Title: Chapter 1 Lord William's New Guest

btw this stories based off of an interactive that has all sorts of creachers like fiarys to dragons link

https://www.writing.com/main/interactive-story/item_id/1562917-The-Prisoner/map/

Reviewer: Evermore Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 03 2015 11:15 PM Title: Chapter 1 Lord William's New Guest

I thought I would leave a review here, just to let the author know that there are still people out there who would be interested in seeing this story continue. There are a lot of things I'd like to see, including why finding out Felix is human startled Arachne, the way Felix and Arachne relationship evolves as she grows larger and, of course, if the two of them can ever escape Lord William. I understand that those things, especially the last bit, will probably be difficult to resolve in the plot, but please keep up the good work!

 

Reviewer: aronse265 Signed [Report This]
Date: December 04 2014 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 1 Lord William's New Guest

Hey, this story is AMAZING I love how you have included a dridder from felarya, and since I love felarya i figured i would love this too and i was correct. Please reply and tell me when you are thinking of posting the next chapter because that would be awesome if we knew an estimated time for the next chapter.

Reviewer: RandomStoriesHQ Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 03 2014 7:00 AM Title: Chapter 10 Putting Others Before One's Self

I think this amazing story deserves a review! First of all, I've never read a g/t story about a slave before and when I skimmed over the title I was instantly entranced and wanted to read more! I love the way you've created a whole new giantess species with the properties of a spider! It's ingenious, and I love the gentle interaction between Felix and 'the monster' :) it's rare to find such a creative and gentle story like this on this site and I'm really glad you're writing this one! Please continue soon!

Author's Response: Thank you, but I didn't create a dridder. Dridders have been in stories for centuries, I believe. Giant dridders have been done before. They are one of the main races in Felarya, which I didn't create either that belongs to Karbo. You should take a look at Felarya, most of the main races are giant taurs and giant mythical beings.

Reviewer: Gadgetman Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2012 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 1 Lord William's New Guest

Very nice man I love this story, its gentle and cute. I kinda wish a comic was made of this, because as much as I love the world of felarya, pretty much every comic that takes place in it is not gentle.



Author's Response:

Thanks, but this story is also not even set in Felarya. It just has a character from Felarya who is now trapped in another world.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2012 3:06 PM Title: Chapter 10 Putting Others Before One's Self

I think Arachne must have heard stories about humans. Hopefully we will discover why she reacted like that. I hate cliffhangers.

Reviewer: LJin Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2012 12:34 PM Title: Chapter 10 Putting Others Before One's Self

Poor Arachne, hope she realizes Feliz isn't like most humans. :( And hope Felix learn to truly trust her and others, despite the slavery and everything he went through in his life. :( I want so much for their friendship to grow stronger and they find freedom and happiness.

Reviewer: zenonvip78 Signed [Report This]
Date: January 29 2012 10:33 AM Title: Chapter 1 Lord William's New Guest

A very thought-through and nicely written story plus a hint of Felarya. Simply a pure win! :D

I can't wait to see how this story progresses! :)

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2012 4:13 PM Title: Chapter 8 I Want to Help

I hope Achane can finally get some courage. Hopefully Felix and her can be free soon.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2012 4:08 PM Title: Chapter 7 Pain

This scene reminds me of a story from the Bible stragenly; the one about the lion's den, athlough I can't remember who's in it because I don't read the Bible.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2012 4:06 PM Title: Chapter 6 Slave

Unfortunately for Felix, he didn’t wake up at his usually time

Usual.

I hope Felix will be alright. I hope the story has a happy ending. Also, what do the guards think about him making friends with the Arachne? Would they not ask why he is taking so much time to feed her? She is surely distracting him from his other tasks so might Lord William be worried about this? Or maybe he  can use Felix to his advantage?



Author's Response:

Thanks for spoting that. It's fixed now.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2012 2:56 PM Title: Chapter 5 Monster?

I hope there is a way for Arachne to escape...

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2012 2:42 PM Title: Chapter 3 Caught in a Web

Those guards are pretty mean. I have an inklining that the giant monster is actually rather nice. Lord William is a cunt.

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2012 2:39 PM Title: Chapter 2 Rubies in the Dark

I noticed this:

However, due to the size of the size Lord William decided

 Size of what? Prison cell I'm assuming.

And here:

Those giant irises were the color or rubies

Color of rubies.

 

Oversized cobwebs...interesting. Onwwards; I must know more.



Author's Response:

Thanks for pointing those two things out. I'm surprised no one else noticed them. These are all first draft chapters, so there's bond to be some mistakes here and there. If you notice anymore, please tell me. 

Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2012 2:32 PM Title: Chapter 1 Lord William's New Guest

I wonder what or who the guest is. I really want to find out, so I'm heading the next chapter right now.

Reviewer: angeloflife Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2012 2:58 AM Title: Chapter 9 Watchfull Eyes

This has been such a sweet story, you really made me feel sad to how Arachne and Felix is being treated by the bad guards. Arachne is such a sweet and carring young girl.

I very much look forward to reading more.

Reviewer: Krauser Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 01 2012 2:17 AM Title: Chapter 1 Lord William's New Guest

Hey man this is really great stuff! Please tell me you will continue this story, I'm hooked! A felarya story has never made me feel this way before! You just gotta continue it or i'll die!

Reviewer: Strongkobayashi85 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2011 11:46 PM Title: Chapter 9 Watchfull Eyes

Wow im surprised that there is a felaryan story in which nobody gets eaten.....so far^^

 

Its really well done. I hope to read more in the future and keep up the good writing style :)

Reviewer: LJin Signed [Report This]
Date: December 31 2011 9:34 PM Title: Chapter 9 Watchfull Eyes

Wonderful story! Thank you, I love so much these fantasy tales with friendship and love. :)

Reviewer: asdfsdfasdf Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2011 2:09 PM Title: Chapter 1 Lord William's New Guest

Great story and well written! I was happy to see you added more chapters. I really enjoy these types of characters and how they build a trust for each other. 

I can't wait to see what happens next. I can't anticapate where the plot is going from here.

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