Reviews For The Doll
You must login (register) to review.
Reviewer: Woodlenks788 Anonymous [Report This]
Date: March 13 2019 12:07 PM Title: Chapter 1

Active Nike shoes for girls Nike Huarache men Womens necklace Pandora Off White shop tokyo Pandora vintage allure Adidas Superstar mens Sterling silver Pandora charms Pandora rings for men Nike wedge sneakers Nike Air Max 1 white Adidas Superstar mens Nike sb tee Red uptempo Air Max infrared Lebron James shoes 15 Nike kobe boys Adidas drops Nike discount codes august 2019 Nike air white mens Air Max 1996 Adidas Yeezy 350 2019 Lebron 13 black lion Adidas NMD burgundy All white Lebrons 20 dollar Yeezys Pandora earring and necklace gift set Air Max 90 womens Asics gel quantum 360 womens Hunter green Adidas Adidas order Nike high top sneakers Adidas x stella mccartney Nike free run 1.0 Pandora disney safety chain Nike Air Max 2 Nike factory store Nike Vapormax chukka slip Nike Air Max womens 2019 Air Max 1 sean wotherspoon Olive green Nike shoes Mens black Red Bottom shoes Nike Air Max 90 2018 Nike x Off White red Air Max 98 pink Nike flex run 2019 Nike free rn 2019 men's Air Max Lilo and stitch Pandora charm Nike sneakers womens running Pandora petite charms Air Max plus men Nike 720 Nike af1 camo Nike free rn commuter 2019 on feet Pink Vapormax plus Jordan gamma 11 Nike air zoom pegasus 34 Air Max 2019 colorways Mens white Nike trainers Adidas crazy train Purple Nike shoes mens Nike cheer sideline iv Nike Cortez leather Pandora princess crown ring Adidas pharrell williams Air Max 09 Adidas jammers Red Nikes Baby boy Nike sandals Pharrell williams NMD 2019 Kanye West new shoes Chris Louboutin Christian Louboutin belle Nike free running flyknit 2019 Nike presto running shoes Adidas adizero White prestos Triple black Vapormax plus Nike Air Max 2019 grey blue Pandora aunt charm Jordan 5 camo Air Max 1 og red Nike official site Nike air pegasus 33 Blue and white Jordans Pandora charm bracelet sale Nike metcon 4 review NMD r2 black Womens Nike metallic shoes Adidas website Nike free rn 2019 Nike Air Max 95 premium Grey Nike shoes Nike Air Max parra Cheap Nike 270 Nike Air Jordan xviii Nike Vapormax mens Maroon Adidas Air Force 1 mid on feet Floral Huaraches Nike 25 off Nike Air Max 1 pinnacle Asics ahar Pandora Charms valentines 2019 2019 Nike college shoes Custom Nike shox Asics gel blur 33 Womens Nike flex 2019 rn Nike black friday 2018 Pandora Charm Necklace Tenis Nike 2019 Nike free womens running shoes White Air Max Nike animal print shoes Adidas retro Af1 just don Macys mens Nike shoes NMD laceless Nike Air Huarache 2019 Christian Louboutin Red Bottom pumps Nike lunarepic 2019 Nike vaporfly Nike cb 34 Womens lace Adidas Nike id Air Max 2019 Lebron 12 black Nike Air Max 2019 womens uk Pandora boy charm Adidas usa Adidas zx flux Off White sneakers uk Adidas size guide New Nike shoes Yeezy tan shoes Custom Air Forces Nike winflo 4 mens Nike Air Max 90 premium Adidas pharrell williams hu White af1 Adidas toddler sneakers Adidas Superstar pink Adidas premium outlet Air Max2 cb 94 Mexican Huaraches mens Air Max bw Yeezy 350 v2 for sale Nike Lebron 14 Nike flyknit trainer 2019 review Adidas Yeezy Boost 350 pirate black Adidas pharrell shoes Air Force 1 boots Nike air slides Huaraches mens Yeezy size 9 Nike factory outlet sale 2019 Adidas cloudfoam slip on Yeezy Boost 350 black and white Adidas wholesale distributor Black Air Max Vapormax Champs Adidas Pandora heart ring silver Pandora heart of winter necklace Nike Vapormax Infant Air Force ones Jordan 12 black and white Af1 Adidas NMD r2 Nike running tennis shoes Pink Nike Air Max 97 Footasylum Jordans Adidas flux white mens Pandora firefighter charm Where to buy Off White in london Adidas NMD r1 primeknit white Air Max force Nike Air Max 95 mens grey Air Max 97 white blue Pandora charms sale Womens white Ultra Boost Nike uptempo shoes 6pm Asics Sf Nike Air Force 1 Lebron 15 low black Air Max command mens Baby pink Air Max 97 Boys Nike shoes size 12 Air Vapormax plus white platinum Pandora snow white Womens black Adidas trainers Vapormax Nike womens Pandora 2019 club Charm Adidas all star shoes Womens grey Adidas Ultra Boost og Nike sb de la soul high Nike zoom flyknit 2019 Asics camo Lebron shoes size 6 Nike Air Force price Nike flyknit trainer review Adidas gazelle brown New Lebrons 16 Adidas drop off Jordan 13 Air Max fusion Nike Air Max ltd Nike air tavas black 2019 Air Max girls Yeezy Yeezy Yeezy Adidas stripes shoes Nike discount Nike Air Max 97 plus mica green Olive Huaraches womens Red 97 Air Max Gel kayano 24 Nike outlet coupon code New Kanye Nike vapor maxes Nike sneakers for ladies Black Nike prestos Nike sb nyjah white Adidas Yeezy youth Blue Off White Nikes Off White store Red Bottom wedding shoes Pandora offers 2019 Air Max flair 50 Adidas Ultra Boost clima Mum rings Pandora Jordan 11 red Nike suppliers Custom Lebron 15 Mens black Yeezys Pandora charms UK sale genuine Pandora las vegas New release Nike shoes Nike free rn motion flyknit women's NMD r2 pk Pandora couple bracelet Shoe carnival Nike sandals Pandora feather earrings Nike vomero mens Pandora shop Nike tennis shoes women Nike Huarache run ultra se Nike tanjun trainers mens Nike coupon code Cheap Nike running shoes for men Nike tn trainers NMD r1 black and white New Air Max 2019 black and purple Air Max Nike Air Max 1 toddler Nike Air Max sports direct Asics gel gt 2000 Burgundy Adidas New style Nike shoes All red Adidas Superstar White Air Max Pandora ring Nike Air Max plus green Purple Louboutins Nike new releases women Air Force 1 drip New Nike presto running shoes Pink Air Force ones Yeezy Boost 350 v2 price Louboutin dallas Pandora gift sets Ladies Nike sneakers 2019 Nike Air Force 270 Black presto extreme Nike men's cross training shoes Pandora bee charm Green Nikes womens Pandora lock charm Nike Jordan shoes boys Adidas NMD r1 white Multicolor Air Max 95 Goyard las vegas Red Air Force ones Adidas NMD r1 womens white Colorful Nike Air Max plus Blush Adidas shoes Nike Vapormax womens Nike coupons in store printable 2019 Yeezy v3 What brand are Red Bottoms Adidas knit trainers Nike Air Force 1 jester All red Air Max 97 All white Air Max 97 Nike hyperace Black friday Nike deals 2019 Nike flex 2019 all black Nike marty mcfly Nike winflo Nike hyperdunk flyknit low 2019 Adidas back packs Asics track spikes Jeff johnson Nike Adidas NMDS black Pandora promotions 2019 canada Nike 95 pink 2019 Adidas Ultra Boost Jordan hydro 7 Adidas EQT Womens Adidas neo Yeezy Boost 750 Pandora 70 off Adidas Superstar hologram Yeezy Boost 2019 Yeezy Boost 500 Vaughan mills Pandora Pandora tiara ring New Nikes 2019 Stan Smith sale UK Lebron 15s Lebron 9 shoes Nike Air Max plus tn ultra black Nike Air Force 1 mid black Adidas NMD salmon pink Best Air Max 1 colorways Pandora boy charm Yeezy Boost next release 2019 Green Louboutins Nike Air Force 1 low Pandora tennis bracelet Adidas Ultra Boost triple grey Flyknit Vapormax womens Acronym Air Force 1 Nike Vapormax flyknit women's Nike Air Max orange and black Adidas adilette women's Men's Adidas Alphabounce em Where is Pandora jewelry made Nike air zoom pegasus 34 Nike Air Max tailwind 7 women's NMD sale Glitter Huaraches Womens new Air Max 2019 Pandora memorial charm Yeezy Boost 750 release date 2019 Orange Air Max Nike 2019 air presto Air Max size 4 Nike Air Jordan 11 retro Asics gel treadmill Nike zoom air basketball shoes Nike wide fit mens trainers Adidas with pink stripes Lebron limited edition shoes 2019 Pigalle x Nike 2019 Mens Nike free rn motion flyknit 2019 Nike Air Vapormax flyknit white Roshe 2 flyknit Nike air Vapormax men Adidas Superstar slip on womens Nike uptempo 2018 Nike Air Max 97 sale White Nike shoes mens Adidas NMD r1 Asics gel nimbus womens black Supreme nba Air Force Adidas bottoms Asics



Author's Response:

What upon earth is this about...seems like a confounded advert for sportswear.  UGH!

Reviewer: Simpson3k Signed [Report This]
Date: August 04 2013 11:17 AM Title: Chapter 1

Really a nice story, but..you forgot to add vore and insertion to the categories.



Author's Response:

I can't believe, after so long, that you, as well as other members of this club, still send comments of my stories.  It's quite uplifting, but, it's been so long now since I stopped writing. However, I have still saved all my stories, some of which are not of the Giantess genre. They are of the normal-sized characters such as in one story: The Skin Fashion" which may not appeal to those on this site.  You may, if you wish, get in touch and I shall glady post to you via e-mail.

Reviewer: Poe00069 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2012 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love this story, from the first time I read it, many years ago. It really pulls you in, sticks in your head and makes you think (or shudder) like all good stories should.

As for the vore, I love it as well! Please leave it in.

 



Author's Response:

Well, talk about a blast from the past!  Marvellous to see a review after so long.  As I shall comment to another reviewer (whoever you are) Poe00069, it takes all kinds to appreciate an author's style and imagination.  As for the subject of "vore" I shall always revel in that circumstance, and perhaps go further as I have in another yarn I wrote called "The Skin Fashion" which I shall leave to your imagination.

 

Many thanks for your knid and uplifting remarks.

P.S. If you are interested, or simply curious, let me know and I shall gladly post it you personally.

Reviewer: Poe00069 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 19 2012 11:42 AM Title: Chapter 1

I love this story, from the first time I read it, many years ago. It really pulls you in, sticks in your head and makes you think (or shudder) like all good stories should.

As for the vore, I love it as well! Please leave it in.

 

Reviewer: tweaky Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2009 5:42 PM Title: Chapter 1

Banfield:  This is the old editor of Vision Publishing.  I bought your story about 9 years ago.  You are a great writer, no doubt about that.  But if you can, every now and then, avoid the "vore" it would make it so much more pleasant to those who dsilike that.  I am seriously considering VP again with not only stories, but screenplays.  Write a story, as only you can do, with no toilet, no vore but insertion and "clean" butt play and you may find yourself a very happy man.  Email it to me at:  yuuvgotmale@hotmail.com and we'll go over it.  If nothing else, I'd love to see you write w/out vore and bowel movements.  You are one of the best in the world at this and in my opinion you need to appeal to wider and different audences.  Use "butt" and "squashing" by all means, but leave vore and human functions completely out of it.  Use your imagination.  Nice to see you again.

Author's Response:

Well, Tweaky, I shall contact you.  You suggest I "use my imagination" which, if you check on all my stories, I most certainly do.

Reviewer: Anonymous starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 20 2006 8:45 PM Title: Chapter 1

Excellent story banfield. It was captivating right to the end. Excpet for being torn apart and eaten alive, I think it all might be fun.

I was hoping that the women would have put him in the toilet and relieved themselves on him. But still, an excellent story.

What happened to the second part though, where the writing all got scrunched together.

Author's Response:

Ah, Anonymous, a blast from the past, as they say. 2006!  My, my, much water has gone under the bridge since then.  So glad you enjoyed the story (and others in this site) but am sorry the gory parts do not bode well with you.  However, like any artist, one can only paint or write to one's imagination and intent. For example, I have painted (in oils) several exciting females but cannot/do not portray males - or anything else for that matter.

If you like, I could happily send you personally a number of my artworks which I have had photographed expertly.

Glad to see that a member of our club has furnished the missing portion of "The Doll."

Reviewer: BigAl Signed [Report This]
Date: July 24 2006 4:55 PM Title: Chapter 1

Banfield, you are quite right that nowhere near enough people take time to review stories or give opinions. I have to admit to being guilty of this as well!

For what my opinion is worth, I love your style of writing, and this particular story is brilliant... What I wouldn't give to be that doll (at least at the start!!)

Keep up the good work!

Author's Response:

Many thanks, BigAl, for your uplifting comments. I'd love to "keep up the good work" but I regret to say that the impetus I once possessed has left me, but my visions have remained and will not leave me.  Have you read the other yarns on our wonderful site..."Read Meals" for instance?

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 28 2006 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 1

This copy of Banfield's great story is incomplete - appears to have been truncated. It has another 1800 words in it.

Following is the rest of this story:

... and with her free hand callously ripped one of his arms from his shoulder and threw it onto the dressing-table, then seized the other arm. Eduardo, for that was surely who he was, screamed hideously, but caught up with the pleasure of dismembering the annoying little man, Denise tore the other arm with a frightful wrench and tossed it to join the former limb. With no regard for her lover, Leda, Denise, not having had a cup of tea yet, felt suddenly thirsty. She put her mouth to one shoulder and then the other to drink the blood. Yes, real blood! The poor, wretched Eduardo had, quite literally become human. Gone now was that assertion, that defiance he had so bravely adopted at that young, beautiful, up and coming model of giant proportions to his twelve inch stature.

Like a little girl playing on her own with vicious adolescence, capturing insects, Denise turned to his legs. 'Noooooo!' he screeched; but the fiendish "game" went on. A big grin appeared over her seductive features as she grasped one leg. With just that extra effort, the limb broke away from his hip-joint. It fell close to his ripped-off arms. The last limb then followed leaving the horrified midget totally limbless. Denise then sadistally lapped at the blood flowing from whence his legs had been, then her eyes focussed on his dangling genitals. 'I haven't had break- fast yet,' she giggled. Again he screamed as she raised his torso to her mouth. Blood dripped from all four places from where his limbs had been torn.

First, she extended her bloodied tongue and lapped at the masculine appendages, the penis and testicles waved to and fro, yet still the wretched creature howled and screamed. There seemed he could not die as a man would under such dreadful circumstances.

She glanced at him with a lustful and pitiless grin and opened her mouth just a little to embrace his genitals with her sexy lips. 'Mmmm...a teeny sausage and two teeny eggs,' she murmured, and then quickly caught the organs between her sharp teeth, another aspect of her beauty she took great care of. She bit and as her teeth gradually met the little man let out a high- pitched squeal. Denise closed her lips and gazed at him as she sucked the tiny morsels, sending them from one side of her mouth to the other, soaking them with her saliva. Then her teeth began their mastication, chewing them up to a pulp. 'Mmmm...' she murmured, then gave a swallow. Eduardo saw her throat bob as his manly possessions slid down her gullet.

'Denise, Denise!' came a call from downstairs, 'It's nearly twelve, you know, aren't you feeling well...or are you still asleep? I can make you a little breakfast!' There came the sound of footfalls ascending the narrow staircase. A sense of guilt and panic erupted in the girl's heart. She was holding the unmanned and limbless Eduardo in her hand, his genitals being digested in her stomach, his limbs lying on the dressing-table. Quick as a flash, her mind concocting excuses, she parted her legs and, as if inserting a tampon, pushed him out of sight into her glutinous vagina. Then hastily picked up the limbs and wrapped them in the soiled underwear.

'Have you got a pad or something?' she called just as Leda entered the bedroom, 'I've just star- ted,' referring to her monthly periods. The pretty girl purposely shewed the signs.

'Yes, my darling. I always keep them as an emergency, in case I start during the night.' Leda, deceived by her sex-partner's cunning subterfuge, took out a packet of s.t's from the drawer in which she stored her knickers. As she handed the s.t's to Denise she peered into the drawer: 'That's odd. Where's that doll?' Denise, adopting a casual indifference, placed a pad under her crotch and put on a fresh pair of knickers: 'Don't know. You did put him back there, didn't you?'

'Yes, I'm sure I did,' muttered Leda as she pulled one pair and another of her knickers aside. 'He's not here.' She opened other drawers with the same result. 'Now where could he be?'

As Denise pulled her knickers up tight over the bulging pad, she felt the squirming Eduardo in her vagina. God, she thought to herself, the bugger's still alive! She then thought about the small pile of undies lying there on the floor, and the evidence of her savagery. 'I'll get rid of these,' she said as calmly as she could, and gathered them up. As Leda continued searching she asked Denise if he was in amongst them. Denise pretended to squeeze the underclothes. 'No, not here. I'll take these down and pop them in the washing-machine...Okay?' Then, as she stepped from the room she again kept up the pretence: 'I think he must have got out of here when I went for a pee earlier. I thought I heard something...thought it was a mouse or something.' Leda cursed: 'Damn...damn...damn!' Denise wore a smirk on her face as she descended the staircase. So much for "True love." She quickly re- moved the limbs from the washing and stuffed them deep into the rubbish-bin in the kitchen then crammed the undies into the washing-machine. Yet again using her conniving initiative, she turned the machine on - just in case. Every now and then she gave a start as the dismembered figure deep inside her wriggled about.

Leda was terribly upset. It was as if she'd lost a dear pet. 'Never mind,' smiled Denise with false compassion, 'You've still got me.' Leda was slightly mollified. 'Yes, darling, but you won't be with me for very long. You'll soon be off on some shoot somewhere. America or .... Look, darling, I really must pop out. You can come with me if you want. I must try and find a local gipsy camp.' Denise's heart sprang as an opportunity lit up in her scheming mind, but her _expression shewed her reluctance. 'Leda, I'm rather hungry and I need a shower or a good soak. You go and I'll be all right.'

'Are you sure, my love?' Denise was sure right enough. She waved "tearfully" as Leda hurried off on her quest to find that wizened old gipsy-woman.

Once she was gone, Denise hoisted her skirt and drew her knickers down and off her feet. She spread her lithe legs and removed the s.t. There was blood on it but not, surprisingly, very much. She then squatted and began inserting her fingers into her vulva until she felt Duardo. Very slowly she drew him out of her vagina. Astoundingly, he was still alive and would have been kicking if he had the legs to do so. She gazed at him in amazement, his head, face and torso besmeared with her vaginal fluids. His eyes were blinking in the bright light and his mouth dribbling with her mucus.

'I don't like competition,' she said to him. 'I think Leda was getting too fond of you. It's me she loves, and me who gets her all sexy and that. So you've really got to go. Now I know you can't die. She told me. So, how do I really get rid of you? I could simply chop you up into tiny bits and flush you down the lavvy-pan, or perhaps put you into the mincing machine? I 'spose I could just burn you up, but we don't have a fire...too warm for that. No, I've got a super idea...' He looked at her in terror, hearing all those ghastly ways of being got rid of. He could only wriggle his torso and shake his head as he shrieked in despair. Whichever way she decides, it will be terrible.

'Ah, I know,' she said beaming all over her lovely face, her eyes sparkling with her diabolical idea, 'I'm really hungry. Haven't had anything 'cept your little things...' A unearthly howl came from him: 'Please!' he screeched, 'not that! You can't be so cruel!'

'Oh, yes I can,' she replied contritely, 'I can be as cruel as I like. Anyway, you can't die, no matter how I kill you or anything. So I've decided what I'm going to do...' She paused for a moment relish- ing his terror, then she slowly licked her lips. She saw his eyes widen, and then he howled when she parted her lips to reveal her sparkling white teeth. She straightened up and carried him to the table. She sat and held him over a plate. 'Now, where shall I start?' she murmured, her eyes going from his head down to his torso. An evil smile came over her. 'Here, I think,' she said, and lifted his stumped torso to her gaping mouth. He screamed as her teeth closed over his midriff, just over his navel. His pleading eyes stared up at hers as she clenched her teeth. Blood poured from his upper trunk almost filling her mouth. She gave a gulp sending the rich-red blood down her throat. 'Mmmm...' she mumbled with her mouth full, 'It's like delicious claret!' She then took another bite, this time over his neck. His head was left in her fingers - and still he lived. She made him look as she chewed his torso, the sound of crunching bones quite audible. Droplets of blood trickled fom the corners of her lips. Her tongue periodic- ally curling out to gather it up.

'Mmmm...delicious! I really needed that...'specially on an empty tummy,' she mumbled. It took time for the gory contents of her mouth to be fully masticated before she swallowed.

'Now your head,' she said, 'Then you'll all be gone, all in my belly. Can't think how you're still alive.' She spoke quite casually, looking at him as she would a large sweet - a kind of gob- stopper. Into her mouth went Eduardo's head. She happily, without any conscience, began sucking it as she went up to the bathroom to take a leisurely bath.

As she lay in the hot steamy water liberally mixed with bathsalts and perfumed oils, she hoped and prayed almost that Leda would never find that gipsy; but if she did, and purchase another doll, she vowed it would go the same way as Eduardo. She smoothed the slick contours of her body with the palms of her hands as she placed the head between her teeth. She was sure she could hear the shrieking sounds coming from Eduardo's mouth. With a sadistic smile, languishing in the hot bath, she bit. A crack sounded followed by the crunching of her molars.

We leave that dissolute vixen as she masticates the head of that wretched Eduardo who will, as he is cursed, exist for eternity in her belly... his everlasting sepulchre of a living body.....


Author's Response: Thank you, Safetypin, for adding the remainder of this story. What a pity we writers don't get much response! That's probably why there is such a scarcity of stories. I do have more such yarns but one loses the heart to post them because of the seemingly lack of interest. How sad! Banfield

You must login (register) to review.