Reviews For Distant Relatives
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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 16 2012 3:01 PM Title: Temptation

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Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 15 2012 6:48 PM Title: Temptation

great chapter. an awesome lead up to chapter 5.

aaron

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Date: January 08 2012 1:17 PM Title: Early morning escapades

nice start

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2012 4:03 PM Title: Early morning escapades

Sorry; but, somebody's got to say it.

Jake, m'boy? "Urine" for it, now!

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2012 9:15 AM Title: Early morning escapades

great stuff. love this story lots. hope to see more of amanda.

aaron

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Date: January 01 2012 2:32 PM Title: sleeping arrangements

Great story, especially now Nique is a tiny SW, hope to see Jake's cousin's having some fun with her!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2011 6:42 PM Title: sleeping arrangements

Yeah! Like Emily was really offended by the attention. I think not!

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Date: December 31 2011 6:38 PM Title: The Relatives

Gee! I wonder if they're going to be "kissing" cousins?*

*Insert "Dueling Banjos," here.

Reviewer: Cheezo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2011 4:56 PM Title: sleeping arrangements

Great chapter! Is they all going to be gentle? Or will some be violent like in "The Caretaker"? If so, whose going to be the violent one?

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 31 2011 4:28 PM Title: sleeping arrangements

great chapter. cant wait for teasing from amanda. but i hope her daughters are nice to nique an jake while they sleep on their dresser. will they get to stay in a 'dolled-up' shoebox later?(possibly amandas)

aaron

Reviewer: Cheezo Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2011 9:55 PM Title: The Relatives

Great start! Looking forward to the future chapters. Will the playing and teasing only be coming from the aunt and cousins? Or will the mum get involved aswell?

Author's Response:

thank you, and yes, I'm not sure how yet, seeing as she's a loving caring mother, maybe sh'll have a bit much to drink or something, but I never found time ofr it in the caretaker, so I definetely plan on his mother becoming another of the many dominant women in his life, I probably won't go as extreme as incest with her, but a little footplay wouldn't be too far outta the park. ;)

-Jake

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2011 9:03 PM Title: The Relatives

great idea for a sequeal. looking forward to what happens next. i just hope nobody vicious to him or nique because of all the crap they had to put up with, that being said i wouldnt mind seeing some teasing or humiliation.

aaron
ps hope theres some parts with aunt amanda having jake an nique play on her giant feet/toes.. just a thought;p

Author's Response:

trust me, there will be PLENTY of playing and teasing to come

-Jake

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