Reviewer: zol Signed [Report This]
Date: June 09 2013 7:54 AM Title: Amanda's dark side.

Totally loved the last chapter. I hope you will stay it by the vore ending. I loved the idea of one unaware, the other aware about Jack's fate. And How his aunt would feed him to his mother, who wouldn't even know about it. Maybe you could write out the ironic/sarcastic event even more, including digestion, how the two woman would talk and at the same time Jake would book a one way trip through mom's bowls. Make include some more jokes by his aunt to his mother, who wouldn't know the irony of it. I also liked how his aunt got wet while watching him being devoured unknowingly.