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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: March 31 2012 3:39 PM Title: Problems and solutions

He'll probably agree to let them exploit his vore-phobia if they let Nique completely alone. But, that strikes me as a diabolical contract. And, to paraphrase an old expression; you can't make that kind of contract without burning your fingers.

Reviewer: Small_but_firm Signed [Report This]
Date: March 30 2012 8:18 PM Title: Problems and solutions

This is turning into Oscar material. When can we see the movie version of this hot gold?

Reviewer: Pixis Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2012 12:47 AM Title: Problems and solutions

I haven't read all of "The Caretaker" but this story seems interesting. I like that the lead characters are past the initial shock of shrinking and are just trying to live their lives among giants. The fact that the girls know Jake's afraid of being eaten should prove to be fun (not for him perhaps but definitely for the readers).



Author's Response:

I'm glad you like the story, and yes, i'm sure the readers will be entertained ;)

-Jake

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