Reviews For Motherly love
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Reviewer: Ace of Spades Signed [Report This]
Date: April 18 2012 8:40 PM Title: Sheamus' past

Your story is great and you are a nice writer. I liked the part of Brad serving his sisters`s feet and when he was trapped inside his mom`s shoes.



Author's Response: Thanks. Since you liked those I'll try to add more scenes like that in future chapters

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: April 08 2012 12:52 AM Title: Sheamus' past

Well done!
Could be improved with more explicit descriptions.

 



Author's Response: Yeah I know looking back at it that chapter was slightly rushed. I'll probably edit it in the future.

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