Date: May 31 2012 5:58 AM Title: My story
I absolutely fell in love with the chapter 'My big little sister' though I didn't really like the 'Going to work with Mommy' chapter.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I'm sorry to hear that you didn't like that chapter. I just hope it didn't ruin the whole story for you.
Date: May 15 2012 8:10 PM Title: My story
Awwww.... a fitting end. I loved this story from start to finish, and I'd like to thank you.
That being said, I'm not fully certain there's anywhere you can really go with the story after this, barring something cheesy, so I'd recommend starting anew with something from the Challenge section.
But I'm not a professional writer. Whatever you do is up to you, and I'm sure you'll make the right choice either way.
Sorry for the long comment. Good story!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! I myself couldn't think of a plot for a sequel which is why I left it up to you guys. I'll only do a sequel if someone posts an idea that I think will work.
[Report This]Date: May 15 2012 1:58 PM Title: My story
awseome story but i believe the sequal could be something like the create a "cure" for brads mom but the cure isnt right and it causes her to gro a bit more and inhance her features, if u catch my drift
Author's Response:
Oooooh, I totally catch your drift ;) I'll definately consider that for a sequel. Thanks for reading and thanks for the review!
Date: May 07 2012 8:14 PM Title: My story
Yeah, the vore wasn't all that good... but no one really cares. There's literally hundreds of other stories like that on this site.
What this story has is a fascinating plot! Nicely done.
Author's Response: Thanks. Like I said at the beginning of the chapter, I don't really have a vote fetish so it wasn't as good as I would have hoped. That aside, thanks for the positive criticism and kind comments :)
Date: April 09 2012 1:58 PM Title: My story
(dramatically) Dun dun dunnnnnn!
This is, and I am being serious, like a really good movie. Just when you think you know what's going on, everything changes!
I eagerly await the next installment.
Author's Response: Thanks. I won't be writing chapters for a while now though. Exams are a bitch.
Date: April 05 2012 8:18 PM Title: My story
Intriguing...
I had thought the story might be drawing to a close, what with him growing and all, but this mysterious stranger adds a whole new level of story to the mix.
In case you didn't feel like reading that, Nice Job!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! The story is actually nearing the end. There aren't many chapters left.
Date: April 04 2012 8:51 PM Title: My story
This is turning into an amazing story! I mean, I normally don't follow stories with this much feet, but this is fantastic! The emotion, the revenge, the sheer terror you just know the rapists are feeling...
Fucking fantastic man!
Author's Response: Wow thanks! Really didn't expect it to have that much effect. Glad you're enjoying the story. More to come soon :)
Date: April 02 2012 8:50 PM Title: My story
Ah, the best dirty writer since Shakespeare updates again, and our favorite little boy gets lost once more. I know something good is cuming up.
And no, I never misspell.
Author's Response: Thanks for the review! There's much more to cum ;)
Date: March 05 2012 1:51 PM Title: My story
So now he's back with his momma? And she's grown a tad? Hmmmm.... I don't know what to expect, butt I know it won't be pretty.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Was the "butt" mispelled intentionally? or was it just a typo? lol.
Date: February 13 2012 3:10 PM Title: My story
I do hope he eventually gets back with Becky. She just made anal insertion seem so... pleasant. You got the feeling that he liked going up her ass. I do hope he gets the chance to go up again.
Author's Response: You will have to wait and see ;)
Date: February 10 2012 5:44 PM Title: My story
Nice work! You're working fast on this thing. I love what you've done with the most recent chapter, and I appreciate you bolding the good (although you said bad) parts. Keep it up man!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I mainly put it in bold because I know that some people aren't into that stuff. I'll try to add new chapters soon but I only add them when I think of something slightly original. Because there's nothing I (personally) hate more than a repetitive story.
Date: February 10 2012 3:33 PM Title: My story
I love the progress you've made, but I feel like the foot thing has gotten a little worn out. There's only so many ways you can say "he was in her feet."
If I was you, I'd try to branch out a little more, and maybe do some more butt stuff. Those parts of the story were by far the best. Please do more butt?
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I totally agree with you. I've also noticed that I've been doing a lot of feet lately. But don't worry, now that he's with Samantha I plan to make him do much more than just play with her feet. If ya know what I mean ;)
Date: February 01 2012 10:32 AM Title: My story
lol this was unexpected. XD Now I'm even more anxious for the next chapters.
Date: January 13 2012 8:48 PM Title: My story
nice chapter! your definetely improving, I can tell, there seems to be quite a bit more detail now, keep it up!
-Jake
Author's Response: Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: January 11 2012 4:06 PM Title: My story
Your prose seems to have improved a bit for this chapter, despite the lack of spell checking, and the spelling wasn't too bad regardless. Well done!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! Like I said, I didn't have time to spell check today. I might go over the chapter tommorrow but I'll see how I feel. Glad your enjoying the story so far.
Date: December 26 2011 4:11 PM Title: My story
I definetely like the idea of his growing mother, although his relationship with his sister is still a bit unbelievable and a little to sudden in my opinion, but I do like the longer conversations he's strating to have.
-Jake
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I see what you mean about the sudden relationship. I might edit the earlier chapters and add clues that they're both into each other later on.
[Report This]Date: December 21 2011 5:38 AM Title: My story
WOW! Best story I've seen in a while. 11 out of 10! I love the gentle side of mother/sister but erotic at the same time. Can't wait to read more hope u have lots more to this story cause its shaping up to be a classic. Thx and good job!
Rhino
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. I've just added a new chapter so enjoy!
[Report This]Date: December 20 2011 3:26 PM Title: My story
I am enjoying this story. I always love butt and feet related work, both aware and unaware, so having all of that is right up my alley. Hopefully our tiny hero ends up permanently in one of those two places! :-)
Keep it up, my friend!
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review!
[Report This]Date: December 19 2011 3:48 PM Title: My story
more boob/butt stuff, its good so far it needs a little more banter though.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. The newest chapter contains a bit of butt. But I see what you mean. I started the story off slow to give you a good understanding of the characters and their personalities.
Date: December 19 2011 1:09 PM Title: My story
Now this was quite an enjoyable read. I agree with you in that giantess stories involving the family are woefully linear in how they tend to deal with inter-character relations, and I quite like what you've done with it so far. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Thanks. I'm glad you like the story so far and will try to keep you entertained.