[Report This]Date: July 15 2012 12:02 PM Title: Pranks
Thanks a lot for the answer. And if that could happen, that would be just awesome actually. I mean your idea with the "lost chapter". I really would like to see that happen.
[Report This]Date: July 15 2012 1:22 AM Title: The New Law
"Maybe I'll go back and add it as the "lost" chapter or something eventually"
That is an awesome idea and I love you for even having it. Of course, I actually enjoyed this story enough that I finally felt compelled to register on this site, just so I could write this out and tell you as much. So, uh, yeah, much love for all your work here, and no complaints beyond the massive tease in this chapter.
Date: July 13 2012 10:12 PM Title: The New Law
Great Story! Suggestion: What about a follow-uop story featuring DJ Tiny and Lady Bigfoot? You already have the beginnings of the story right here. Sort of like WKRP in Cincinnati with tiny men and giantesses. The transition from male control to insignificant roles in the workplace. Shrunken men could not be fired, but would be easily dominated by their female co-workers. Mix in some office rivalries with the new jobs and watch the changes happen at the radio station. What do you think?
Author's Response:
I actually really like that idea. I probably wouldn't include too much of DJ Tiny and Lady Bigfoot since I've basically outlined their entire story within this story. They would be more side characters. I'll kick this idea around, but unless multiple chapter ideas suddenly invade my mind, I probably won't end up doing it. As much as I love the concept, I have, like, 25 other projects already started. No, that's not a mistype. My folder that has all my new stories has 22 items, and I know at least one or two of them contain outlines for multiple stories. So, unless I feel the need to do it, I probably won't. Besides, if I wrote it, I think I would just focus on two DJs. Like a morning show duo or something. I think this story would be a lot better about multiple people working at the radio station. The duo, Tiny and BigFoot, the producers, and more, but I'm not the writer to bring that sort of story to life. As awesome as those stories are, it's too many characters, too many situations, and too much time on a single project for me. If anyone else wants to give it a go though, I more than welcome it! As long as the person credits me for Tiny and LB, that person can go for it. I wouldn't mind hearing those two on the air again, especially when Lady Bigfoot first joins the team. She asks him on the air how he's transitioning into his new tiny life, he comments how he's looking for a new apartment that's not so far and not so big, and she offers to let him live in one of her shoes. It's plenty of enough space for a shrunken man... except when her foots inside, but that's when it becomes a motor home!
[Report This]Date: July 13 2012 4:50 PM Title: Pranks
As much as I love your story, I have one question though, why do you never going through with what this story is all about? I mean, it's fine having some kind of thrill for a few times, but dont you think it's becoming a little bit, let me say, weird, if it happens over and over and over again? Please dont take me wrong, I love your story, so this is not meant in a negative way. I totally loved the suppositories idea, I wished to much she wouldnt have notices. I know this mostly will not happen anymore, but if you someday would write another story, or even more than one chapter, I would love to this this suppositories idea again. I have to say this was one of my all time favorite ideas ever, I had reading something similiar in some other stories before, and I always liked the idea. Keep up the great work!
Author's Response:
I'll admit, in a lot of my stories, there's a lot of me teasing the audience that the giantess is going to do something that she doesn't. I do it far less in other stories, but this story is different. As much as I wanted to see Kevin go in Jenna's butthole, I couldn't do it, because that's not what this story is about. It's about a changing world, and watching the changes as they happen. If Jenna would have inserted Kevin, it would have changed the story, and it definitely would have changed how it ended. I was actually so disappointed that Kevin didn't get inserted into Jenna's big ol booty, that I wrote an outline for a similar chapter involving Debra and her step mom where the tiny actually got inserted. I didn't write it because for one, I thought it would have been repetitive, and two, I want to just go ahead and finish this story. So, you're not alone in the disappointment. Maybe I'll go back and add it as the "lost" chapter or something eventually, but right now, I'm excited to be working on the other projects I've been fleshing out for a few months.
[Report This]Date: July 12 2012 4:54 PM Title: The New Law
Another excellent chapter. That was a close one. Looking forwards to the story's finale.
[Report This]Date: July 12 2012 4:45 AM Title: Pranks
Great chapter. It's saddens me to think that the story is so close to finishing. That being said, I will definitely look out for your future stories.
[Report This]Date: June 18 2012 1:07 AM Title: Amy's Dilemma
Another brilliant chapter! The worst part of this story is the wait for new chapters. This is one of the few stories I wait for on this site.
Author's Response:
Sorry about the wait! I had most of the story complete for the longest time, but not a lot of time to finish it. Hopefully you won't have to wait another month for the next chapter!
Date: June 06 2012 7:25 PM Title: The New Law
Really enjoying the story so far. It's been interesting to see how Nicole has been tormenting her step-brother, and I'm really looking forwards to seeing how this story is finished up. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.
Date: June 03 2012 10:58 AM Title: Confliction
First of all it is a very good Story. The Ending of chapter 11 is very interesting. I like the conflict Nicole is in. I Hope that there is a little more Focus in her Butt ans her Feet....
Date: May 17 2012 4:39 PM Title: Confliction
I was a little confused too. You were doing well right up to when it was made clear, after everything, that Nicole actually loved her brother and was family oriented. That seemed to settle her struggle with him. It then gets confusing since you introduced her second guessing herself. I think the struggles she has internally should have been worked out prior to making her coming to terms with her family loyalty and brotherly love. But I do like that you are working out the internal dialogue and conflict that the characters are facing. I think thats important, and definitely adds realism. 3 chapters left? Darn! :) Kevin has finally shrunk, would almost be a shame to not explore that for more than 3 chapters, since you've created a world, at home and abroad, that is also struggling with the shrinking factor. Lots to explore! But thats just my wishful thinking. Thank you for all you've written and look forward to more of your work!
[Report This]Date: May 17 2012 1:11 AM Title: Confliction
Although I'm finding these mixed feelings very interesting, I'm confused at the fact that Nicole had them for Kevin but not for her step dad. Other than that, great story and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you brought this up. I thought about adding something to explain why she didn't have mixed feelings about her step dad, but I couldn't quite find a place to tie it in.
The reason she didn't have mixed feelings about doing it to her step dad is because of three reasons. One, Nicole had reached her boiling point of Dan telling her what to do, even though he was barely bigger than her toenail. Kevin on the other hand hasn't done anything to piss her off in a very long time. Reason number two is that she was only going to do it to Dan for a brief time just so she could demonstrate his lack of power, but in the imaginary scenario she has for Kevin, Nicole's butt would be Kevin's permanent home. And the final reason is because while Dan was only just barely tucked into her buttcrack, Kevin would be nestled all the way down between her globes, right against her least attractive of holes. I comment in the step dad part of the story that when Nicole stuck Dan between her cheeks, she didn't even know he could smell her asshole from where he was at. So, it's one thing for a giantess to temporarily stick a guy between her buttcheeks while not knowing he's getting a whiff of her scent, and a completely different thing for a giantess to make a tiny guy live against her foulest smelling hole.
[Report This]Date: May 17 2012 12:22 AM Title: The New Law
I'm mainly a foot guy, but you've done a great job so far. I for one actually hope the stepbrother is eventually forced to at least smell his stepsister's feet, and then placed in her ass. I'm sure the finale will be great, but I'm also hoping that his time in her ass is truly punishing and horrific, possibly ending him.
Date: April 29 2012 11:09 AM Title: The New Law
Its a geat story, but enough with the setup. Shrink Kevin already and get the story moving. Also bring the father back into the story. Once he shrinks, try using more height comparisons. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response:
Don't worry. Kevin will be shrinking VERY soon. Unfortunately, that's the sign that the story is coming to a close. Only about 6 more chapters left, and as of right now, the dad is only in one of the very last ones.
[Report This]Date: April 18 2012 11:17 PM Title: The Morning After
Yes, please continue.
This has the potential of becoming a very good psychological theme giantess horror.
I look forward to each new chapter.
Date: April 05 2012 8:19 AM Title: The New Law
This first half of the chapter was great. Looking forward to the second half.
Date: March 29 2012 9:35 PM Title: The New Law
Great story! Can't waut until he shrinks. When will the next chapter be ready?
[Report This]Date: March 10 2012 11:33 PM Title: Night of Preparation
Easily my favourite chapter that you've done. Keep it up.
[Report This]Date: March 04 2012 8:18 PM Title: Night of Preparation
great descrriptions and dialogue. cant wait til he shrinks
[Report This]Date: February 17 2012 10:16 AM Title: The New Law
I have to say I am enjoying this story a lot. I love the foot-and-butt centric nature of the tale, though I would love if the step-mom got more involved. But there you are.
[Report This]Date: February 17 2012 12:59 AM Title: Idle Threats
You are doing an amazing job on this story