Date: June 03 2012 10:58 AM Title: Confliction
First of all it is a very good Story. The Ending of chapter 11 is very interesting. I like the conflict Nicole is in. I Hope that there is a little more Focus in her Butt ans her Feet....
Date: May 17 2012 4:39 PM Title: Confliction
I was a little confused too. You were doing well right up to when it was made clear, after everything, that Nicole actually loved her brother and was family oriented. That seemed to settle her struggle with him. It then gets confusing since you introduced her second guessing herself. I think the struggles she has internally should have been worked out prior to making her coming to terms with her family loyalty and brotherly love. But I do like that you are working out the internal dialogue and conflict that the characters are facing. I think thats important, and definitely adds realism. 3 chapters left? Darn! :) Kevin has finally shrunk, would almost be a shame to not explore that for more than 3 chapters, since you've created a world, at home and abroad, that is also struggling with the shrinking factor. Lots to explore! But thats just my wishful thinking. Thank you for all you've written and look forward to more of your work!
[Report This]Date: May 17 2012 1:11 AM Title: Confliction
Although I'm finding these mixed feelings very interesting, I'm confused at the fact that Nicole had them for Kevin but not for her step dad. Other than that, great story and I can't wait for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
I'm glad you brought this up. I thought about adding something to explain why she didn't have mixed feelings about her step dad, but I couldn't quite find a place to tie it in.
The reason she didn't have mixed feelings about doing it to her step dad is because of three reasons. One, Nicole had reached her boiling point of Dan telling her what to do, even though he was barely bigger than her toenail. Kevin on the other hand hasn't done anything to piss her off in a very long time. Reason number two is that she was only going to do it to Dan for a brief time just so she could demonstrate his lack of power, but in the imaginary scenario she has for Kevin, Nicole's butt would be Kevin's permanent home. And the final reason is because while Dan was only just barely tucked into her buttcrack, Kevin would be nestled all the way down between her globes, right against her least attractive of holes. I comment in the step dad part of the story that when Nicole stuck Dan between her cheeks, she didn't even know he could smell her asshole from where he was at. So, it's one thing for a giantess to temporarily stick a guy between her buttcheeks while not knowing he's getting a whiff of her scent, and a completely different thing for a giantess to make a tiny guy live against her foulest smelling hole.