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Reviewer: CrummyCrusader Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 03 2019 2:25 AM Title: The New Law

Fantastic story. I'm surprised nobody else has commented, but then I realized how painful it is to create an account. Good work.

Reviewer: hunterfury22 Signed [Report This]
Date: March 03 2016 3:05 PM Title: The New Law

Hey this is one of my favorite stories and I would love to see more of this universe in a future story especially after the whole rule change. I want to see how that works functioned. Like guys being used as bracelets or rings for girls. Maybe a short showing it would be cool. Loved this story.

Reviewer: Simpson3k Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 31 2013 5:14 AM Title: The New Law

Great story, every single chapter was really alot fun to read. Didnt even notice time passing by as i readed it :)

Really would love to read more about Nicole and her stepbrothers adventures inside of her XD

 

Oh and lol...sad that Amy didnt pass gas on "acidently" poor little Steve XD

Reviewer: soniti54 Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: October 30 2012 12:29 AM Title: The New Law

I have to start with three words: What a tease!
By the end of chapter 12 I was convinced Nicole and Jenna would never collect on Dan and Kevin's misfortune.

I found this to be very plot driven, which could be dull, but not unwelcome. The characters were unique, consistent, and did well to build an entertaining atmosphere through interactions and relationship.

Very well written story. I only wish there were a chapter 16 or epilogue, but all good things must come to an end, so I'll just be happy that it was completed. :]

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2012 8:46 PM Title: The New Law

Hey, no problem! I had an inkling that that was the conclusion, but also thought you might include a description or internal narrative of the stepbrother's emotional and psychological destruciton, as he was finally placed where his stepsister had always forshadowed he'd end up. Your ending works and does allow for the reader to speculate as to the gory possible ending to men in general, but the males in this family, specifically.  Can I ask if you did intend for the stepbrother's fate to ba as dire and hopeless as was hinted here? If you did an epilogue, what'd you plan? Thanks!



Author's Response:

Actually, I originally intended for it to be pure panic and fear, but I decided hopelessness made more sense. If the step brother hadn't been teased for so long about it, than fear would be the likely choice because he didn't see it coming, but with Nicole, you knew there was no hope, so it made sense for him to recognize that fact as well. Of course he was still petrified of Nicole's butthole, but knowing he could do nothing about it watered down that fear because living in Nicole's butt had already become a reality by that point by acknowledging it was completely unavoidable.

As for the epilogue, it would take place just moments later, but then suddenly go to a flashback about Debra, her step mom, and her step brother. The reason I didn't write it as part of the story is because it's VERY similar to chapter 13, so I thought it would be better to come back and add it later once chapter 13 has had enough breathing room to where it doesn't look like I just remade the same chapter! It's less of an epilogue and more of a "bonus" chapter.

Reviewer: voredom227 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 18 2012 5:38 PM Title: The New Law

I've got to say, this has been by far my favourite giantess story I've ever read, the way everything is described is perfect, and overall the actual slow progression and constant teasing really works well. The only gripe I have with the ending is the lack of description from Kevin's point of view. It doesn't stop it from being an amazing final chapter, but hearing kevin's views on his position would have given it that little extra bit of flare. Still, as I've said, I thoroughly enjoyed the story, and I look forwards to reading anything else you release.

Reviewer: Footsteps Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 17 2012 4:23 PM Title: The New Law

I have to say that this is, by far, my favorite giantess story. The way the women of your stories speak of their cheeks is mind blowing. I try to understand how you made Nicole such a sexy character and I think I know, at least for me, what is was: she was obsessed with having someone between her cheeks. Like, REALLY turned on by it. I like to think that she never stopped hoping she could experience it again.

Once again this was an incredible story and I sincerely hope to hear about more women like Nicole (or maybe even Nicole herself!) again.

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: September 16 2012 9:13 PM Title: The New Law

Thanks for the thorough explanation. You're a great write and I am looking forward to the concluding chapter. Again, as a foot guy, you've really done an excellent job of making this girl's ass pretty darn attractive (from an abusive standpoint). I'm always in the mood for a dark ending and am hoping that the stepbrother's fate is as horrific as you alluded to in the latest chapter.  His sister's cruel pschological abuse was perfect.  All that remains is for the his his fate to be sealed!



Author's Response:

Bro, I don't know how to tell you this.... Life Changes WAS the last chapter. I was going to state that in the 'End Notes' section after the chapter, but decided against it when I realized it would be better for the reader to finish the story and then just think about the fate of every tiny man in the world, especially Kevin's, Dan's and DJ Tiny's. Story's over... unless I do the epilogue chapter, but that wouldn't be for a long time.

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: September 15 2012 7:41 PM Title: The New Law

I am enjoying this story, despite being almost exclusively a fan of foot stuff. I for one appreciate the lead-up to the last chapter and think you've done a great job of laying out the cruel fate of this young man. I do have a question, though. You've said several times that you've already written this story out, including the conclusion.  If so, why do you wait so long between posting chapters?  For that matter, why not post it in its entirey?



Author's Response:

I guess I should elaborate on this. I never have the story fully complete. I usually have the first four or five chapters done, outlines of a few chapters, and the conclusion partially written. For example, in this story, the ending was the last two chapters. Before I even posted the first chapter, I had the president's speech 3/4 of the way written, all the dialogue written after that speech, but I had none of the paragraphs that led into the presidents speech and very little written of the narration between each character speaking. That's why these last couple of chapters took so long, because I basically had to go back and write all the boring parts, a lot of he said, she said stuff. I usually write entire chapters, proof-read them a week later, and then post them, but occasionally I'll write chapters that are almost completely all dialogue because I don't have time to write the entire chapter, but I have an idea for what I want to happen. I usually kick myself later because it's boring to go back and fill in all the stuff between the dialogue and it usually needs a bit of a rewrite, which is why these last two chapters took a while. The only reason I even decided to do it yesterday was because of YOU GUYS! I know how frustrating it is when an author gives up halfway through a story, and that's why I always have an ending planned for mine before I start posting it. Yesterday, I decided it was about damn time I gave you the ending you all were waiting for, and I apologize for the wait.

On the bright side, I have about 25+ potential stories in a folder on my computer, and most of them are short stories like Kate's Detention or Sorority Prank, which means you'll get the full stories when I upload them. Only two of them are going to be divided into chapters like this one. When they'll get uploaded? Who knows. I have a story called Powder that's been about halfway written for two years. Then there's another story called Amy the Ass that I sat down and wrote half of the other night and hope to have finished very soon. So many projects, so little time.

Reviewer: thatothersting Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 15 2012 1:22 AM Title: The New Law

"Maybe I'll go back and add it as the "lost" chapter or something eventually"

That is an awesome idea and I love you for even having it. Of course, I actually enjoyed this story enough that I finally felt compelled to register on this site, just so I could write this out and tell you as much. So, uh, yeah, much love for all your work here, and no complaints beyond the massive tease in this chapter. 

Reviewer: shaka Signed [Report This]
Date: July 13 2012 10:12 PM Title: The New Law

Great Story!  Suggestion:  What about a follow-uop story featuring DJ Tiny and Lady Bigfoot?  You already have the beginnings of the story right here.  Sort of like WKRP in Cincinnati with tiny men and giantesses.  The transition from male control to insignificant roles in the workplace.  Shrunken men could not be fired, but would be easily dominated by their female co-workers.  Mix in some office rivalries with the new jobs and watch the changes happen at the radio station.  What do you think?



Author's Response:

I actually really like that idea. I probably wouldn't include too much of DJ Tiny and Lady Bigfoot since I've basically outlined their entire story within this story. They would be more side characters. I'll kick this idea around, but unless multiple chapter ideas suddenly invade my mind, I probably won't end up doing it. As much as I love the concept, I have, like, 25 other projects already started. No, that's not a mistype. My folder that has all my new stories has 22 items, and I know at least one or two of them contain outlines for multiple stories. So, unless I feel the need to do it, I probably won't. Besides, if I wrote it, I think I would just focus on two DJs. Like a morning show duo or something. I think this story would be a lot better about multiple people working at the radio station. The duo, Tiny and BigFoot, the producers, and more, but I'm not the writer to bring that sort of story to life. As awesome as those stories are, it's too many characters, too many situations, and too much time on a single project for me. If anyone else wants to give it a go though, I more than welcome it! As long as the person credits me for Tiny and LB, that person can go for it. I wouldn't mind hearing those two on the air again, especially when Lady Bigfoot first joins the team. She asks him on the air how he's transitioning into his new tiny life, he comments how he's looking for a new apartment that's not so far and not so big, and she offers to let him live in one of her shoes. It's plenty of enough space for a shrunken man... except when her foots inside, but that's when it becomes a motor home!

Reviewer: voredom227 Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: July 12 2012 4:54 PM Title: The New Law

Another excellent chapter. That was a close one. Looking forwards to the story's finale.

Reviewer: voredom227 Signed [Report This]
Date: June 06 2012 7:25 PM Title: The New Law

Really enjoying the story so far. It's been interesting to see how Nicole has been tormenting her step-brother, and I'm really looking forwards to seeing how this story is finished up. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter.

Reviewer: Jay Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: May 17 2012 12:22 AM Title: The New Law

I'm mainly a foot guy, but you've done a great job so far. I for one actually hope the stepbrother is eventually forced to at least smell his stepsister's feet, and then placed in her ass.  I'm sure the finale will be great, but I'm also hoping that his time in her ass is truly punishing and horrific, possibly ending him.

Reviewer: shaka Signed [Report This]
Date: April 29 2012 11:09 AM Title: The New Law

Its a geat story, but enough with the setup.  Shrink Kevin already and get the story moving.  Also bring the father back into the story.  Once he shrinks, try using more height comparisons.  Keep up the good work!



Author's Response:

Don't worry. Kevin will be shrinking VERY soon. Unfortunately, that's the sign that the story is coming to a close. Only about 6 more chapters left, and as of right now, the dad is only in one of the very last ones.

Reviewer: miniscule Signed [Report This]
Date: April 05 2012 8:19 AM Title: The New Law

This first half of the chapter was great.  Looking forward to the second half.

Reviewer: shaka Signed [Report This]
Date: March 29 2012 9:35 PM Title: The New Law

Great story! Can't waut until he shrinks.  When will the next chapter be ready?

Reviewer: Azra Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 17 2012 10:16 AM Title: The New Law

I have to say I am enjoying this story a lot. I love the foot-and-butt centric nature of the tale, though I would love if the step-mom got more involved. But there you are.

Reviewer: hertinypal Signed [Report This]
Date: January 13 2012 9:25 PM Title: The New Law

very nice chapter. I look forward to more great installments. Nicole is a very appealing character. keep up the good work.

Reviewer: Mrduhkota Signed [Report This]
Date: January 11 2012 8:01 AM Title: The New Law

Amazing in every way, I look forward to reading more from you. Both in this story and the others that you hopefully plan to write.

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