[Report This]Date: December 11 2020 4:25 PM Title: Life Changes
This is one of the stories that got me into giantess fantasies in the first place. The utter hopelessness as Kevin finds out that for the rest of his life, all he will ever see and smell is Nicole's butthole, is percect.
Date: October 29 2020 7:34 AM Title: Life Changes
My favorite story on every site !!! i want more, i need more chapters !!!
[Report This]Date: January 03 2019 2:25 AM Title: The New Law
Fantastic story. I'm surprised nobody else has commented, but then I realized how painful it is to create an account. Good work.
Date: March 03 2016 3:05 PM Title: The New Law
Hey this is one of my favorite stories and I would love to see more of this universe in a future story especially after the whole rule change. I want to see how that works functioned. Like guys being used as bracelets or rings for girls. Maybe a short showing it would be cool. Loved this story.
Date: January 12 2016 12:39 AM Title: Life Changes
Continue please....
Date: December 28 2015 7:17 PM Title: Life Changes
Wow..
The final chapter is the most interesting
Please continue the story
Tell us what will come next. ..
[Report This]Date: July 31 2013 5:14 AM Title: The New Law
Great story, every single chapter was really alot fun to read. Didnt even notice time passing by as i readed it :)
Really would love to read more about Nicole and her stepbrothers adventures inside of her XD
Oh and lol...sad that Amy didnt pass gas on "acidently" poor little Steve XD
[Report This]Date: October 30 2012 12:29 AM Title: The New Law
I have to start with three words: What a tease!
By the end of chapter 12 I was convinced Nicole and Jenna would never collect on Dan and Kevin's misfortune.
I found this to be very plot driven, which could be dull, but not unwelcome. The characters were unique, consistent, and did well to build an entertaining atmosphere through interactions and relationship.
Very well written story. I only wish there were a chapter 16 or epilogue, but all good things must come to an end, so I'll just be happy that it was completed. :]
[Report This]Date: September 25 2012 9:33 PM Title: Life Changes
Really enjoyed this story, thought it was well written, and the characters were all well fleshed out. I didn't have any problems with Jenna turning on her husband, in fact I actually felt it was a bit overdue. That said, I can understand why others might have felt it seemed sudden, since there was a significant time gap between chapters. Thus, a lot of off-screen things that we have to take the narrator's word on.
I'm not sure if I'm articulating that very well.
As for the epilogue, it would take place just moments later, but then suddenly go to a flashback about Debra, her step mom, and her step brother. The reason I didn't write it as part of the story is because it's VERY similar to chapter 13, so I thought it would be better to come back and add it later once chapter 13 has had enough breathing room to where it doesn't look like I just remade the same chapter! It's less of an epilogue and more of a "bonus" chapter.
I feel obligated to say that breathing room is severely overrated. Of course, I only say that because I'm still cursing that tease in chapter 13.
Just the same, I really enjoyed this, and I hope to see a lot more from you.
[Report This]Date: September 18 2012 8:46 PM Title: The New Law
Hey, no problem! I had an inkling that that was the conclusion, but also thought you might include a description or internal narrative of the stepbrother's emotional and psychological destruciton, as he was finally placed where his stepsister had always forshadowed he'd end up. Your ending works and does allow for the reader to speculate as to the gory possible ending to men in general, but the males in this family, specifically. Can I ask if you did intend for the stepbrother's fate to ba as dire and hopeless as was hinted here? If you did an epilogue, what'd you plan? Thanks!
Author's Response:
Actually, I originally intended for it to be pure panic and fear, but I decided hopelessness made more sense. If the step brother hadn't been teased for so long about it, than fear would be the likely choice because he didn't see it coming, but with Nicole, you knew there was no hope, so it made sense for him to recognize that fact as well. Of course he was still petrified of Nicole's butthole, but knowing he could do nothing about it watered down that fear because living in Nicole's butt had already become a reality by that point by acknowledging it was completely unavoidable.
As for the epilogue, it would take place just moments later, but then suddenly go to a flashback about Debra, her step mom, and her step brother. The reason I didn't write it as part of the story is because it's VERY similar to chapter 13, so I thought it would be better to come back and add it later once chapter 13 has had enough breathing room to where it doesn't look like I just remade the same chapter! It's less of an epilogue and more of a "bonus" chapter.
[Report This]Date: September 18 2012 5:38 PM Title: The New Law
I've got to say, this has been by far my favourite giantess story I've ever read, the way everything is described is perfect, and overall the actual slow progression and constant teasing really works well. The only gripe I have with the ending is the lack of description from Kevin's point of view. It doesn't stop it from being an amazing final chapter, but hearing kevin's views on his position would have given it that little extra bit of flare. Still, as I've said, I thoroughly enjoyed the story, and I look forwards to reading anything else you release.
[Report This]Date: September 17 2012 4:23 PM Title: The New Law
I have to say that this is, by far, my favorite giantess story. The way the women of your stories speak of their cheeks is mind blowing. I try to understand how you made Nicole such a sexy character and I think I know, at least for me, what is was: she was obsessed with having someone between her cheeks. Like, REALLY turned on by it. I like to think that she never stopped hoping she could experience it again.
Once again this was an incredible story and I sincerely hope to hear about more women like Nicole (or maybe even Nicole herself!) again.
[Report This]Date: September 16 2012 9:13 PM Title: The New Law
Thanks for the thorough explanation. You're a great write and I am looking forward to the concluding chapter. Again, as a foot guy, you've really done an excellent job of making this girl's ass pretty darn attractive (from an abusive standpoint). I'm always in the mood for a dark ending and am hoping that the stepbrother's fate is as horrific as you alluded to in the latest chapter. His sister's cruel pschological abuse was perfect. All that remains is for the his his fate to be sealed!
Author's Response:
Bro, I don't know how to tell you this.... Life Changes WAS the last chapter. I was going to state that in the 'End Notes' section after the chapter, but decided against it when I realized it would be better for the reader to finish the story and then just think about the fate of every tiny man in the world, especially Kevin's, Dan's and DJ Tiny's. Story's over... unless I do the epilogue chapter, but that wouldn't be for a long time.
Date: September 15 2012 11:58 PM Title: Life Changes
thanks i thought you have forget about this story i really like your way of writing please continuo
I don’t know but for ones I like to see the men take their revenge like the shrinking stop and the men go back to their original size and take the women rights as a punishment I am not the writer but I really like to see this kind of ending for ones
[Report This]Date: September 15 2012 7:45 PM Title: Life Changes
Lovin' this story! Would make a nice break for Kevin to be eaten by her! Lucky lad!
[Report This]Date: September 15 2012 7:41 PM Title: The New Law
I am enjoying this story, despite being almost exclusively a fan of foot stuff. I for one appreciate the lead-up to the last chapter and think you've done a great job of laying out the cruel fate of this young man. I do have a question, though. You've said several times that you've already written this story out, including the conclusion. If so, why do you wait so long between posting chapters? For that matter, why not post it in its entirey?
Author's Response:
I guess I should elaborate on this. I never have the story fully complete. I usually have the first four or five chapters done, outlines of a few chapters, and the conclusion partially written. For example, in this story, the ending was the last two chapters. Before I even posted the first chapter, I had the president's speech 3/4 of the way written, all the dialogue written after that speech, but I had none of the paragraphs that led into the presidents speech and very little written of the narration between each character speaking. That's why these last couple of chapters took so long, because I basically had to go back and write all the boring parts, a lot of he said, she said stuff. I usually write entire chapters, proof-read them a week later, and then post them, but occasionally I'll write chapters that are almost completely all dialogue because I don't have time to write the entire chapter, but I have an idea for what I want to happen. I usually kick myself later because it's boring to go back and fill in all the stuff between the dialogue and it usually needs a bit of a rewrite, which is why these last two chapters took a while. The only reason I even decided to do it yesterday was because of YOU GUYS! I know how frustrating it is when an author gives up halfway through a story, and that's why I always have an ending planned for mine before I start posting it. Yesterday, I decided it was about damn time I gave you the ending you all were waiting for, and I apologize for the wait.
On the bright side, I have about 25+ potential stories in a folder on my computer, and most of them are short stories like Kate's Detention or Sorority Prank, which means you'll get the full stories when I upload them. Only two of them are going to be divided into chapters like this one. When they'll get uploaded? Who knows. I have a story called Powder that's been about halfway written for two years. Then there's another story called Amy the Ass that I sat down and wrote half of the other night and hope to have finished very soon. So many projects, so little time.
[Report This]Date: August 19 2012 1:20 AM Title: Making History
While I'm sure you just want to get through the story as soon as possible, to be honest, I thought there was still more you could've written, this chapter seems rather rushed, and the character development that we'd seen from both Nicole, and Jenna, suddenly made a complete 180. I would've liked to have seen more of Jenna trying to keep her husband and step-son as normal in her eyes as possible, but of course she would have inevitably fallen in with the rest of the world, but over all it's been a good story, and I hope you continue to write more.
Author's Response:
I can understand that the character development feels rushed, but it's supposed to. This was, like, the third or fourth chapter I wrote of this story because I always write an ending when I start a story so I know where it's going. It was always supposed to feel like a 180 because Jenna reached a breaking point. So the arguement isn't whether this chapter seemed rushed, the arguement should be if I did a good or bad job about leading you to a breaking point. It was always supposed to be about Jenna being so miserable and not being able to accept society's views on how to treat tiny men until the laws views refelected society's. Jenna breaks down and nicole takes this vulnerable moment for Jenna to reflects on how miserable her life was. Then I also had her little "hiccup" chapter where it shows her longing to be like the rest of the society, but can't. I put in a lot of things to try and lead you to that moment where her anger finally manifests by shoving her husband between her cheeks because now she has no rules to hold her back. I hope you go back and reread the entire story, because maybe your view will change next time you get to that chapter, or maybe I really didn't do a good job to get you to the breaking point.
Anyone else feel like tinyman91, or were the people out there who thought I did a good/decent job leading up to Jenna's breaking point?
[Report This]Date: August 17 2012 9:18 PM Title: Making History
Love this story! Sad to see it end next chapter :(
[Report This]Date: August 17 2012 5:12 PM Title: Making History
Oh hell yes, been waiting for this chapter to come out, and you have not dissapointed one bit. As sad as it will be for the story to end, I still look forward to the finale. Good job, and thanks for the story.
[Report This]Date: July 30 2012 6:26 PM Title: Pranks
Another really good chapter, though I must say I was hoping she'd go through with it. Looking forwards to the next chapter/s.