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Reviewer: Flaming_Heart Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 07 2014 1:26 AM Title: Chapter 13: Jack Grows Back

Interesting chapter, and that cool how there will be a "Blackmail 5."



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Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2014 5:33 PM Title: Chapter 13: Jack Grows Back

Julia while equal to our antagonist here kind of deserves to go down for her actions. 

 

However I can't help but wish Carly -had- won, I mean Jack while still a person was way less deserving of freedom than the faithful people kept in that room under Julia.

 

Basically there's just something about Carly that makes you while knowing she's terrible for what she's done still remain able to do it.

Great stuff.



Author's Response:

Wow, Carly's convinced you she deserves her freedom, huh? She's even more persuasive than I thought!

Thanks for reading/reviewing.

Reviewer: Ancient Relic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2014 4:45 PM Title: Chapter 13: Jack Grows Back

Excellent look into Carly's mind. It gives us a great description of her thoughts and mindset.



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Reviewer: Nostory Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2014 3:55 PM Title: Chapter 13: Jack Grows Back

Nice preview of his problems, Jack will need a ton of therapy in Blackmail 5 to get over what Carly put him through, just wondering if there will be any big girl- little guy interaction in that one? 



Author's Response:

"A ton" is probably an understatement. Thanks for reading! And even though it won't be Carly messing with Jack, there will certainly be big-little action.

Reviewer: blackairow Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: June 05 2014 3:22 PM Title: Chapter 13: Jack Grows Back

Great chapter :)



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