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Reviewer: ceezy Signed [Report This]
Date: April 20 2016 6:36 PM Title: Chapter 12: The Courtship of Carly Arton (Part 2)

Does jack know carly pleasures herself to him?



Author's Response:

He probably suspects

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 27 2014 1:31 AM Title: Chapter 12: The Courtship of Carly Arton (Part 2)

That was a great chapter. Carly is such a cool character.

 Sure Jack would rather have his old life back. But look at all the adventuurs he gets to go on because of his sister...lol

Please more Carly and Jack stuff soon. These are the best stories on this site.

Dave



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading man.  And really, who could want a normal life back when he gets to do all this fun stuff?  There will be more Carly and Jack once I've gotten closer to finishing my other stories.

Reviewer: realRS Signed [Report This]
Date: February 26 2014 8:38 PM Title: Chapter 12: The Courtship of Carly Arton (Part 2)

Wow, loved Valentine's day.  The perfect balance of roughness for me, not so brutal but completely domineering.



Author's Response:

Thanks for reading/reviewing!

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 26 2014 8:36 PM Title: Chapter 12: The Courtship of Carly Arton (Part 2)

Carly just has a way at making everything she does no matter how mundane, humiliating or even dangerous just so damn amazing.

Looking forward to part five my good man.



Author's Response:

Thanks man.  Carly's one of my favorites to write.  I swear part 5 is coming someday, probably once I'm closer to ending one of my unfinished stories.

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