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Reviewer: Ackbar Signed [Report This]
Date: February 20 2014 1:06 AM Title: Chapter 11: The Courtship of Carly Arton (Part 1)

I can't help but be overly amused at Carly pretending she didn't already have her valentine picked out the moment she woke up.



Author's Response:

Very astute, although it just wouldn't be Carly without the over-elaborate show being put on, would it?

Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 19 2014 5:11 PM Title: Chapter 11: The Courtship of Carly Arton (Part 1)

I"m thrilled to see you writing Carly and Jack again. Great chapter. I'm really looking forward to part 2.

Dave



Author's Response:

Thanks man.  I've already got part 2 mostly done so that will pop up in the near future.

Reviewer: socksarecool Signed [Report This]
Date: February 19 2014 8:01 AM Title: Chapter 11: The Courtship of Carly Arton (Part 1)

Carly is awesome. Great chapter as usual. :)



Author's Response:

Thanks!

Reviewer: wildcatman Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2014 9:37 PM Title: Chapter 11: The Courtship of Carly Arton (Part 1)

'more suspicious than a schizophrenic in a dark alley on acid', That's pretty suspicious Jack!  Ha!

I had nearly forgotten about this one...  Nice update, I wonder who she'll choose to be her Valentine?  Carly's so sweet... god love her!  ;`)



Author's Response:

Thanks for reviewing!  And yes, she is so sweet, what with all the kidnapping and foot sodomy and whatnot...

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: February 18 2014 6:50 PM Title: Chapter 11: The Courtship of Carly Arton (Part 1)

CAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAARRRRRRRRLLLY!

Author's Response:

Bonanza!

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