[Report This]Date: December 23 2012 2:59 AM Title: Chapter 9: One for the Books
This chapter totally makes me think of Handsome Jack and his city Opportunity.
Relatedly: Yaaay! These chapters are really fun.
Author's Response:
thanks for reading/reviewing!
Date: December 19 2012 8:01 PM Title: Chapter 9: One for the Books
i think you should start a new story with the kind of situation she was talking about. Kinda restart with a brother sister combo and instead of just him shrinking, have all men shrink and the world become like Carlys dream.
Author's Response:
i have a few ideas for a story like that that i intend to write up at some point
[Report This]Date: December 19 2012 5:00 AM Title: Chapter 9: One for the Books
after reading carly splat all this bullshit about herself I just had to read the final chs on blackmail 3 just to remember that she finally got what was coming to her. Best way to end the story between a goddess and her bug brother.
By the way are u going to write a story about Jack and his new transition in to peace with Sophie and his family? and what ever happened to the fallen "goddess" Carly? If your not working on anything Im sure everyone would like more from Jack.
Thx for writing. got to bow to the king
Author's Response:
thanks for the review! i often feel the only way i can justify putting Jack through all this is that the ending eventually is happy. i will eventually publish the next installment of this series showing where Jack, Carly, and Sophie have all ended up in the time after the 3rd story, and in fact i do have a small bit of it already written. thanks again for reading
[Report This]Date: December 19 2012 3:08 AM Title: Chapter 9: One for the Books
*bows to El Presidentris Carly*
Honestly it was either going to be her or Julia with the delusions of being some great insperational being. Carly just just kind of fit given that she while not as well forceful as Julia kind of relishes in the view of being superior to those around her.
Though part of me wonders how she would feel if it was a tiny sister she was torturing and not Jack.
Author's Response:
thanks for reviewing. she and Julia are pretty similar in their aspirations, despite Carly resorting a little more to mental torture than physical like Julia. and I'm sure her delusions would be tripped up a little if she had a tiny sister rather than a brother