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Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 04 2012 1:08 AM Title: Chapter 8: Third Wheel

Great chapter. Pkease continue the series. I would love to know what happens to Carly and Jack after you ended it in the third Story.

Dave



Author's Response:

the 5th story will indeed appear at some point. thanks for reviewing

Reviewer: LJin Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 02 2012 2:26 PM Title: Chapter 8: Third Wheel

I really like this 4th story. It is so good to read and be able to get back into this universe even after it was finished.

I am still anxious for the spin-off showing what became of Carly, hope you decide to work on it someday. Can't help but to feel sorry for her since I like her. Hah Don't know why most people hate her so much. :(

Sometimes I wonder how it would be if Sophie didn't appeared and both of them continued to live together, now being a bit different (maybe just a bit haha) from the usual torture since Carly understood her feelings towards his little brother.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review. the 5th story will happen at some point, i have the beginnings of it already written actually

Reviewer: AdamX Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: October 31 2012 8:27 PM Title: Chapter 8: Third Wheel

In Carly we love, honor and obey.

 

Though for being the big bad here you kind of feel for her a bit. Nice job painting Brad as sleezoid.



Author's Response:

thanks for the review. my goal with this 4th story is definitely to at least let people feel things from Carly's side, if not sympathize a bit despite her craziness

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