[Report This]Date: March 19 2022 7:40 AM Title: Chapter 7: Death of a Brother
I know someone else brought this up but always wanted to know how not just Sophie but Jack's parents as well would react if they ever found out what their daughter did to him during his own funeral
[Report This]Date: August 05 2012 8:13 AM Title: Chapter 7: Death of a Brother
This was a very good chapter. Carly is delightfully evil, and I do think there are people capable of doing this type of thing in the world, if given the chance.
thanks for the review! despite how the story can be unrealistic, i try to retain that Carly sees her actions as justified and not truly evil to reflect some kind of lifelike sibling relationship as much as possible
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[Report This]Date: August 02 2012 1:33 AM Title: Chapter 7: Death of a Brother
This is a very good chapter. The Carly and Jack stories are my favorite. Since we Know what happens at the end of the series. I hope you keep this story running for a long time.
I have one question. Will we ever get an update on how Carly is and how she's punished?
Dave
Author's Response: Thanks for the review. I will get around to the spinoff story, and I actually already have a couple notes typed out for it. Eventually, yes.
[Report This]Date: July 31 2012 6:22 PM Title: Chapter 7: Death of a Brother
I've always kind of envisioned a scenario/scene like this in my mind.
The tiny trapped helpless in a sock or shoe inches away from something/anything mentioning the disappearance only to be taunted by the realization of it all.
Bravo, I'm giving this a 10 rating.
Author's Response: thanks! It's definitely one of my favorite general scenarios and this seemed the perfect place to use it