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Reviewer: slave4ever Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 25 2011 3:24 AM Title: Chapter 2: The Break-up

I loved the cruelty of Carly making Jack pay for someone else's crimes against her. The last thing you had her do in this chapter was truly vicious. I loved it.

Dave

Reviewer: SafetyPin Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: December 20 2011 12:55 AM Title: Chapter 2: The Break-up

Great story. Well crafted. I love your detailed descriptions of what is going through her mind. She's psychotic and crazy enough to do anything to Jack - the messier and sexier, the better...

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