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Reviewer: LJin Signed [Report This]
Date: January 14 2012 2:30 PM Title: Chapter 36 - Rescue Operation Part 2

I hope Fran learn her lesson and make up for everything she did. :( And don't want her to be alone, poor Fran. :~

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 13 2012 8:12 AM Title: Chapter 34 - The Peak of Her Rage

Pssssst! I was just humoring the other guy, at the Giantess City version. I really _don't_ want Fran going berserk with a giant LK27 (or whatever it's called). That would defeat your original intention of having a mostly gentle-gts story.

Author's Response:

I assumed you were.  I have my own ideas for this next chapter.  There will be no slicing and shooting and stuff at poor Fran. 

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 11 2012 11:26 PM Title: Chapter 34 - The Peak of Her Rage

abby's finally found her baseball bat, an is cracking it over fran's head as we speak. lol

aaron

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 10 2012 6:01 PM Title: Chapter 33 - Partial Obedience and Violent Rumors

A more important question; is Jim finally going to meet his Maker?

:-(

Author's Response:

I dunno.  I might make a cameo in the story so he can meet his maker :P

As far as on a serious note, you'll just have to wait and find out!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 08 2012 6:56 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Cowering Before Fran's Rage

*Reviewer shakes head in pity. Twirling right finger around ear while pointing left one at Fran.*

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 07 2012 10:52 PM Title: Chapter 32 - Cowering Before Fran's Rage

just caught back up with this story again. an frans nutty but has great feet. cant wait to see where you take the coming chapters.

aaron

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 06 2012 5:02 PM Title: Chapter 31 - Heated Ride and Growing Rage

Oh, double-brother! I'm more certain than ever, now, that Fran's emotional complex is going to come back to haunt her, Jim, and the whole university, once the anti-Large activists find out about this incident. I don't _exactly_ know how they'll find out! But, I've got a bad feeling they will, none-the-less.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2012 4:57 PM Title: Chapter 30 - Conversation and Worries

I think Helen is dead on target with Abby having a crush-on-first-sight with Jim. But, at least Abby is more level-headed about it than Fran! I also think Helen and Emily are going to develop the same fascination/infatuation. Let's see if the next chapter proves me wrong.

Reviewer: The_Argonian Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 06 2012 5:51 AM Title: Chapter 30 - Conversation and Worries

Oooh... I really want to know what Fran has planned for poor Jim; I had a large grin on my face when se said she was going to take him home... I WANT TO KNOW WHATS GOING TO HAPPEN! I'm literally on the edge of my seat here. Loving Fran's jealousy too... A perfect story overall.

Reviewer: edexdexx Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 05 2012 8:05 PM Title: Chapter 1 - A World of Larges and Minors

I really like the story, especially Fran's character, with her jealous actions, and even comming off a tad psycho in her desire to make Jim love her. Also although I am not reading Life with Samantha, I appreciate you updating both stories consistently around the same time.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: January 05 2012 7:57 AM Title: Chapter 29 - Fran's Jealous Reaction

Oh, brother! Fran is definitely NOT going to be living proof that the anti-Large activists are needlessly paranoid.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: January 04 2012 8:55 AM Title: Chapter 28 - Fran's Search

I know these giantesses are supposed to be non-violent as a rule. But, as Fran seems increasingly to be an exception to that rule, I'm afraid she might fly off the handle in jealous misunderstanding of Emily and Jim's collective cat-nap. :-(

Author's Response:

The Larges are to be non-violent, but that's not to say they don't have feelings, just like the Minors.  With Fran's quick attachment to Jim, there will definitely be some quick jealousy going on here.

 

But...jealousy doesn't necessarily mean she has to be violent, in the physical variety.  We'll just have to see where I take this in the next chapter or two.

 

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 04 2012 8:52 AM Title: Chapter 27 - Abby Awakens

In answer to that third question: her neck, with worry, probably.

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Date: January 02 2012 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Patching Up and Nap Time

Good questions, both. If I were LMU's cheerleading coach, I'd send half the squad to see what was keeping Emily. But, that's strictly "her" decision. Isn't it? ;-)

Reviewer: The_Argonian Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2012 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Patching Up and Nap Time

Again, you have impressed me, although I must say that the last few chapters dragged their feet a bit, it felt as if it took forever to get Emily fixed up, but brownie points for the excellent descriptions and the cute interaction between the two characters.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Patching Up and Nap Time

great chapter. an thats what id like to know: what has become of abby an fran?

aaron

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Date: December 31 2011 10:08 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Needing Assistance

this story is great. love the reaction jim had towards her injured ankle, despite his broken leg. that was truly astounding. an wonderfully written.cant wait to see what happens next.

aaron

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 30 2011 4:48 PM Title: Chapter 25 - Needing Assistance

Don't cheerleaders, nowadays, usually have hair ribbons bearing their school's colors?

Seriously, though; this is one intense note on which to end this year. Have a Happy New One!

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: December 29 2011 7:01 PM Title: Chapter 24 - The Removal

I hope it's not due to a giant snake!

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Date: December 28 2011 6:30 PM Title: Chapter 23 - Navigating the Field and Sneaker

Whew! A very nerve-wracking installment. For some reason, it puts me in mind of ex-Doobie Brother Patrick Simmons' 1983 one-hit wonder, "So Wrong."

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