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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2011 5:49 AM Title: Chapter 8 - Amnesia and Hate

I'm not sure why she would say this:

I know you're going to be an important person to me at some point.

 

How could she know this already, after only just meeting him?



Author's Response:

Well, call it intuition.  I wanted to flesh out some backstory for Abby, but I didn't really want the "Narrator" to tell the reader, moreso than it being told by one of the characters.

I figure it as a situation, where you get a feeling about someone or something and you just 'know' (or at least think you do) that they are going to make an impact on your life.  Sort of like when you're looking at an upcoming movie, game, album, or something else that as soon as you look into it, it automatically clicks as "I'm going to love this".

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 28 2011 1:36 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Amnesia and Hate

I wonder how she'll feel when she learns Jim lied by omission?

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 27 2011 8:40 PM Title: Chapter 8 - Amnesia and Hate

this is very interesting.. i mean selective amnesia a very genius idea. great pace to the chapter as well. wonder if abby an ruby met before? or why ruby has such disdain for the larger people?
anyways, this story is great an hope that there is much more to come.

aaron

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