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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 30 2011 5:42 AM Title: Chapter 6 - Taken For A Walk

I've still got almost plenty

I noticed that line and it doesn't make sense because you should get with of the almost; that's all.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 25 2011 6:55 PM Title: Chapter 6 - Taken For A Walk

great chapter. cant wait to see what they have to tell each other.

aaron

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