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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 02 2012 4:24 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Patching Up and Nap Time

Good questions, both. If I were LMU's cheerleading coach, I'd send half the squad to see what was keeping Emily. But, that's strictly "her" decision. Isn't it? ;-)

Reviewer: The_Argonian Signed [Report This]
Date: January 02 2012 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 26 - Patching Up and Nap Time

Again, you have impressed me, although I must say that the last few chapters dragged their feet a bit, it felt as if it took forever to get Emily fixed up, but brownie points for the excellent descriptions and the cute interaction between the two characters.

Reviewer: aaron Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: January 01 2012 6:48 PM Title: Chapter 26 - Patching Up and Nap Time

great chapter. an thats what id like to know: what has become of abby an fran?

aaron

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