Date: September 24 2015 10:05 AM Title: Chapter 1
Im not eve gonna wait, i read your " giantess world " series, which i believe may be unfinished... and can i just say, no matter what you do, youre the most talented writer ive ever seen (or at least read of XD), never stop, this stuff is pure gold!
[Report This]Date: August 13 2014 10:36 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'm extremely sad the first half or more of this story is gone. I've read it before and it was quite the masterpiece. And good, gradual growth stories are very few and far in between. I would hugely appreciate it if you could somehow repost it.
Thanks for the wonderful story either way.
Author's Response:
Got it reposted.
[Report This]Date: April 23 2014 10:54 PM Title: Chapter 1
This is a good story
Date: November 25 2013 6:23 AM Title: Chapter 1
where 1-5 chapters?
Date: September 08 2013 8:45 AM Title: Chapter 1
I don't know why I keep getting asked for a review of a story I have not yet read.
Date: May 29 2013 3:52 PM Title: Chapter 1
I'd like to be able to read this! Why was it deleted?
Date: March 27 2013 2:22 PM Title: Chapter 1
i want to see it
Date: December 17 2012 9:56 PM Title: Chapter 1
Awesome story!!
[Report This]Date: December 28 2011 6:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
This story was fairly good, just didn't compare to your last one. It sort of lost steam by the end, but your grammar and spelling was spot on.
I can't wait for your next one, any idea when you'll start uploading it?
Author's Response:
I agree. I just didn't put as much effort into this one, mostly because I jsimply didn't have time to. Then I just sort of lost interest.
My next one is going much better, but I'm not sure when I'll be ready to upload it. It's likely be ready in the next few weeks. Thanks for reviewing!
[Report This]Date: November 28 2011 5:40 PM Title: Chapter 1
Chapter 4 was much better. Great writing!
Author's Response:
Thank you!
Date: November 27 2011 2:27 PM Title: Chapter 1
Sorry, that last review was meant for chapter 3, not chapter 1.
Date: November 26 2011 10:18 PM Title: Chapter 1
Hmmm.
From a Giantess standpoint, this chapter was amazing.
Form a writing standpoint, I found it a little too fast. There wasn't as much suspense to this growth as there was to one's in your past stories. It didn't 'flow' as well as some other things of yours that I have read.
Just some constructive criticism, good chapter besides that one point.
Author's Response:
Well thank you for the comments! I've had some difficulty with this story. It's really venturing into uncharted waters for me as a writer, but regardless of how it turns out I think I've learned a lot from it. Thanks for reading!
[Report This]Date: November 21 2011 4:50 PM Title: Chapter 1
Wow, another great chapter! How often will you be updating, these cliffhangers always get me wanting the nexy chapter.
Author's Response:
Glad to see you're enjoying it. I will almost certainly update every few days (2-4). I don't like to wait long when I'm reading, so I don't expect my readers to. Especially with cliffhangers- that's just mean!
[Report This]Date: November 21 2011 4:46 AM Title: Chapter 1
DAMN you can write. Keep this up please. Can not wait to read more
Author's Response:
Thank you! I try my hardest to write good stuff, and I will most definitely keep this up.
Date: November 19 2011 11:37 PM Title: Chapter 1
Was really excited to see your new story! A great start, and it seems even more promising than the last few you've written. Can't wiat to see how it turns out.
Author's Response:
I've got some fun stuff planned. This is a smaller story, characters and setting wise. Leaves lots of room for exploration.