Reviewer: digitaltuna Signed [Report This]
Date: August 31 2014 2:52 AM Title: Chapter 102: CHAPTER AND VERSES ON BRYCE

Rhymescribe? The plot thickens. :-)

Author's Response:

in this case, I'm slightly satirizing the DC Comics 1970s concept, where the Justice League, by means of the Flash's cosmic treadmill, went to Earth-Prime, where super heroes only appear in comics. There they met the staff of DC who created them, and had to find a way back to their own earth-one. I thought, I'd split the word prime into "prose" and "rhyme" to play on my own mixture of narrative text and poetry.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 28 2014 12:56 PM Title: Chapter 96: GARDEN GOBBLING PARTIES

"He?" As in the late, lamented, non-super Jacoby?

Author's Response:

not late yet... and maybe never

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 26 2014 11:59 AM Title: Chapter 94: ESCAPE FROM NEW GENECIDE

"Get your Slipper Cycles movin'.
Head out on the Fly Way!
Lookin' for adventure...
In whatever she-giants come our way."

Author's Response:

Yes, and what would the tune be?

Reviewer: AGrader Signed [Report This]
Date: August 22 2014 11:57 PM Title: Chapter 92: TO WIN THE HEART OF GOLD

This ongoing inside-the-stomach plot intrigues me. Keep it going please.

Author's Response:

Well it won't go on forever, but there are similar elements throughout the story, as you've probably already found out.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19 2014 1:19 PM Title: Chapter 92: TO WIN THE HEART OF GOLD

Jacoby Kurk, eh? What royal-sounding nickname will you give him, I wonder: Duke or Earl?

;-D

Seriously, though? Thanks for sharing these add-ons. They helped to alleviate a lot of midday boredom!

Author's Response:

Actually, he's a sendup of comic writers' names eg Jack Kirby.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19 2014 12:57 PM Title: Chapter 90: SUB-MOLECH-ULAR UNIVERSE

Just one question: is that "molech" as in the Australian horned dragon?*

* #My fellow American readers: the above is a lizard similar to the southwestern U.S. horned "toad."

Author's Response:

Re previous review, btw, readers are not meant to like the Prime Minister of Australia in this story.

And now re Molech, he was the pagan false god of child sacrifice in the old testament, and hence I thought his modern followers would be suitable villains to be taken down in this story... and I do mean down, down, down LOL.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 19 2014 9:06 AM Title: Chapter 85: THE LEGEND OF CHUNDER WOMAN

Well, you said Vector had continued aging within Princess Chunder's stomach. So, I merely surmised that _he_ became a gts-author in his dotage.

Author's Response:

But how would he have written anything in there? Or do you mean after he got out of her stomach?

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2014 9:03 AM Title: Chapter 88: LET THE SHRINKING VOTERS DECIDE

OK! I'm going to be uncharacteristically serious, here, for a moment. This prime minister sounds a lot like the type of paranoid psychiatrists refer to as "self-fulfilling prophets." These are the kinds of people who violently strike out at one or more segments of society they fear (usually, for no good reason). And, when that segment violently retaliates, they loudly proclaim they were right, all along.

God save us from such "allies."

Author's Response:

Well I was surprised to find that an Australian reader Digitaltuna mentioned the Australian government in his review of a recent chapter, and that it struck a chord with him too.

Reviewer: Carycomic Signed [Report This]
Date: August 18 2014 8:56 AM Title: Chapter 86: THE SURREPTITIOUS & SOMEWHAT SECLUDED SIX

I've got a good name already picked out for them: The Just-Us-Tinies League.

Author's Response:

What? You don't like Surreptitious and Somewhat Secluded Six?

Reviewer: digitaltuna Signed [Report This]
Date: August 17 2014 7:47 PM Title: Chapter 1: THE SUPER SCHOOLBOY FORMULA

It would seem we're both Australian, yeah.

Author's Response:

I'm on the outskirts of Sydney, NSW. I've never met or even heard of any Australian woman into giantess vore. The last woman I told about it hasn't spoken to me since I brought it up in April (and she previously said she liked every character trait about me, and that I was "extremely talented writer, and very handsome, to boot.") Two weeks ago, she saw me in a Woolworths aisle, grabbed her kids and bolted in the opposite direction. (I guess telling her that the fantasy worked whenever I looked into her laughing mouth really wasn't such a good idea).