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Reviewer: Carycomic Signed starstarstarstarstar [Report This]
Date: November 11 2011 1:46 PM Title: Chapter 4: THE FORMIDABLE FIVE

Too bad you couldn't have made the last villain a female named "Clara Nette" (able to hypnotize men with her snake charmer's recorder).

Author's Response:

Yes that would have worked.

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