Reviews For Aaron's Nightmare
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Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed starstarstarstarhalf-star [Report This]
Date: November 09 2011 5:36 AM Title: Chapter 4 - Entering the Abyss/It was a Nightmare

The ending is quite sudden but I guess it works. The first person you used was a welcome change to the usual third person and I feel it was used effectively

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