Reviewer: Stubbornstain Signed [Report This]
Date: November 09 2011 5:29 AM Title: Chapter 2 - The Light and White-Filled Container

Actually, despite my prevous review I'm still confused as to what the object he's on is. Your story makes me want ot read on and the short and snappy chapters are effective in this case as at first glance extremelly short chapters tend to imply a poorly written story, as leastov n giantessworld anyway. You're doing a good job.