Reviewer: el_rooto Signed [Report This]
Date: November 01 2013 7:25 AM Title: Chapter 9: Second Detention

I'll admit I skipped this story at first -- read a chapter at random, found a girl playing school with tiny people, and decided it wasn't worth reading. BIGGEST. MISTAKE. EVER!   I came back seeing so many comments and started reading from chapter forty-something, right after killing some Beth, kept on reading to the end (which is chapter 54 as I'm writing this), and now I've started to read it properly -- you know, like, from the beginning...   I just can't tell (in a single comment) how good it is -- I guess I should have taken the habit to write a short review after every 5 chapters or so, but 240 comments probably gave you an idea anyway :)   Well, I'm going back to read, but before that: "swinging her navy blue flat-clad food" -- for a moment I imagined it was oing to be a different kind of punishment :) [Seriously anyway: one typo in more than twenty chapters? That says a lot about how well written this story is, even in this kind of details]  

Author's Response: Thanks for the review; I appreciate you giving the story another shot despite your first impression being unappealing.  I'm the first to admit that the initial premise may be overly familiar to any regular reader of giantess fiction, but my goal with this tale was to build the storyline over time with some level of depth (or at least as much depth as a fetish story can handle without getting boring).  I hope you'll let me know your thoughts on the rest of the story's chapters when you reach them.

Thanks for catching that typo, by the way.  Being the grammar nazi I am at times, I live by the code that anytime I make a typo, a puppy dies, but on a story this long, it was almost inevitable.  Sorry, puppy.