[Report This]Date: May 06 2014 9:32 AM Title: Chapter 56: Freaks and Toys
Whoa! Nice try, Jack. But, no cigar.
Author's Response:
No cigar indeed...
Date: May 05 2014 7:07 AM Title: Chapter 56: Freaks and Toys
Imho the prospect of his friends becoming their toys is the most scary thing you've ever written (never mind that she wasn't even thinking about them...).
I've been thinking what I would do in his place, but I have yet to find an option that doesn't end really bad or isn't at least terribly risky ("I can't think of them as toys, they're my size" - "oh, you're right, let's fix that!", etc).
On the other hand, there is someone who would be more than willing to be involved, but even then, I'm not sure how to revenge chapter 42 and making 100% sure Gina stays unharmed: on top of that, I've had a couple of days to think about it, and I'm afraid poor Jack will have to make a choice fast...
Author's Response:
Thanks for reviewing. Glad to hear I still have the ability to up the scary factor on this thing. You're right in thinking there aren't many great options for Jack at this point, and his chances are going to become even more limited in the next couple chapters. And unfortunately for Gina, Julia has a very liberal definition of the word toy.
Date: May 04 2014 7:50 AM Title: Chapter 56: Freaks and Toys
Hope to see more plot coming. Besides that, great chapter as always!! Keep writing :)
Author's Response:
Thanks very much. There will be more plot-related developments taking place within the next two chapters.
[Report This]Date: May 03 2014 9:15 PM Title: Chapter 56: Freaks and Toys
Great chapter. Nice to see this story again.
aaron
Author's Response:
Thanks!
[Report This]Date: May 03 2014 5:31 PM Title: Chapter 56: Freaks and Toys
Well look at you Wally West!
Wasn't expecting that twist at the end but you've managed to hook me once again, I can't wait till July-August for the next chapter.
Author's Response:
Hardy har har. Just for that, I have a good mind to post it in the June-July range instead.
[Report This]Date: May 03 2014 4:28 PM Title: Chapter 56: Freaks and Toys
Your starring in the upcoming flash movie, who knew.
Well I love this story, so happy for the quick update. Jack is quite a genius, just want to point that out.
Hopefully Flash can update in a month, that would be great. I'm not the only one praying.
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review! I fully plan on adding another chapter before the month is out.