Date: August 01 2015 9:41 AM Title: Chapter 54: It Comes Out
God, I had a feeling Charlie had a hand in ruining their escape attempt. I just wished he didn't though. Fantastic story so far Jack!
Author's Response:
Thanks!
Date: September 15 2013 6:14 AM Title: Chapter 54: It Comes Out
I actually think that Julia's behavior has driven her parents to raging alcoholism.
[Report This]Date: September 13 2013 7:36 AM Title: Chapter 54: It Comes Out
Whoa! This is getting convoluted, alright. But, in a GOOD way! :-)
Author's Response:
At 54 chapters, there probably ought to be some sort of convulution.
Date: September 12 2013 9:27 PM Title: Chapter 54: It Comes Out
Jack such a good actor, or is it just insanity.
But nice twist at the end of chapter with Charlie's.
And it kind of seemed like Jack was jealous at the end there.
Author's Response:
It's probably a little of both. Thanks for reviewing.
[Report This]Date: September 12 2013 8:23 PM Title: Chapter 54: It Comes Out
Wish I could see that sort of "thing on the internet". ; )
Author's Response:
I'm sure many on this site share that wish.
[Report This]Date: September 12 2013 7:05 PM Title: Chapter 54: It Comes Out
So easily, (you make it seem effortless) and above all...still the best!
Although, I wonder if you'll ever be able to 'top' this one Jack? :=/
Juia's anthropomorphic nature really shines through, making her seem so incredably huge....a landscape of unpredictable woman.....
Great stuff!
Author's Response:
You flatter me, as usual. Thanks for reading. I'll certainly do my best to top it. I've got a ton of other stories planned out in my head. Whether they ever see the light of day before I die of old age is another matter entirely.
Date: September 12 2013 4:42 PM Title: Chapter 54: It Comes Out
Somebody's getting their ass beat. Perhaps to death.
Author's Response:
Shhh you'll ruin it. ;)
[Report This]Date: September 12 2013 3:08 PM Title: Chapter 54: It Comes Out
Wow, I wasn't expecting the end of the chapter but the look into how she came to be was interesting.
Totally understand the God complex she has as well.
Author's Response:
Thanks much! Glad you enjoyed it. I figured it was high time we got a closer peek into her head.
[Report This]Date: September 12 2013 2:45 PM Title: Chapter 54: It Comes Out
Absolute thrilling¡¡¡ I read last few chapters since she ate Beth and decide to put all of them in a jar and I was thinking that every next chapter was going too out the plot...but god damn this is what I was expecting...One traitor in the tiny group...
I cannot wait to see the reactions, good work Jacksmith
Author's Response:
Thanks for the review. Rest assured I haven't forgotten that this story does, indeed, have a plot somewhere in there.